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托福写作中考生用词和句式空泛反复的问题经常发作。而依照ETS官方给出的作文评分规范,呈现这类问题都会形成作文扣分。考生如何才干防止在托福写作中呈现用词或句式的空泛反复?下面小编就经过一些例句改写为大家解说技巧思绪。
托福写作如何防止用词空泛?
1. 一些空泛的单词或词组更本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完整能够被删掉。比方下面的句子:
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents,in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion”都显得多余。完整能够去掉。改为:Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2. 有些空泛和繁琐的表达方式能够停止交换,例如:
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,能够交换,简化为下面的表达方式:
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now.
托福写作如何减少内容反复?
1. 尽量防止反复运用同样的词汇。或者有的时分固然词汇没有反复,但意义却有反复。这时分能够做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子::
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
Large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size能够去掉,改为:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简约的表达方式为:My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有时一个词组能够用一个更简单的单词来交换,例如:
My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
这里的over and over again就能够改为repeatedly,显得更为简约:
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
以上就是关于托福写作中防止用词句式空泛反复的改写技巧分享,希望大家可以学会这些办法,提升作文的词句质量,取得更好地作文得分。
小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。
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