托福写作中考生怎样避免语法结构错误导致的扣分?


时间:2020/1/7
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托福写作中由于语法错误招致的扣分问题不断是中国考生的重灾区。很多同窗缺乏对写作语法的认识,常会写出一些存在明显语法构造问题的句式并丧失这方面的得分。托福写作中考生怎样防止语法构造错误招致的扣分?下面小编就给出一些对错实例比照,协助大家理解其中技巧。

 

托福写作防止语法构造错误扣分实例剖析

 

选择适宜的语法构造能够使句子意义的表达更为准确和精练。固然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法构造依然是更为重要的思索要素。以下准绳是在思索选择何种语法构造时能够参考的准绳:

 

1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该可以反映句子中的最重要的意义。例如:

 

The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

 

从意义上来剖析,上面这句话需求表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需求表达的重点概念,能够改为下面这句话:My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

 

2. 防止频繁运用“there be”构造,例如下面的句子:

 

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

 

能够改为:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

 

更简约的句式为:My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

 

3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如:

 

Dairy cows were raised on the farm,which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

 

简介的表达方式为:The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers tothe nearest university.

 

4. 仅在需求强调宾语而不是主语的时分,才运用被动语态。例如:

 

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.

 

本句不够简约的缘由是本句的重心应该是“繁忙的家庭-my grandfather's family”,而运用了被动语态后,似乎重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简约一些:In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

 

5. 用更为准确的一个动词来替代动词短语,例如下面这句话:

 

My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

 

Stand around doing nothing其实能够用一个动词来表达,即loiter:My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends.

 

6. 有时两句话的信息经过组合完整能够用一句话来精练地表达,例如:

 

Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

 

两句话的信息能够兼并为下面这句更为简约的句子:Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.

 

经过以上这些例子,置信大家也可以看出托福写作语法构造扣分的常见状况了,控制了正确的语法构造运用办法,置信大家也能够写出更好的文章拿到高分。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。


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