举例分析新托福独立写作应试技巧

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　　预备期间：

　　在开端着手预备写文章的时分，必定要明晰自个的主题。一般来说考生有30分钟的时刻去方案，写作以及修正文章。在着手着笔曾经必定要仔细阅读标题，牢记不要写跑题。审题的时分必定要定位，归纳和分类。否则将功败垂成。例如： It has been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer. 当遇到这个标题的时分，先确定是support仍是oppose仍是二者统筹。那么接下来的论证即是要围绕你的这个观念来打开，千万不要南辕北辙。明晰自个的观念，能够先列提纲，实践上列提纲是写作的一个非常重要的过程，它能够把握文章的全体思路，让你在写的时分能够有话可说，条理明晰。

　着笔开写：

　　明晰观念，列好提纲之后就要开端写了。IBT的词汇请求大概是4000—5000个词汇，当然在写作中并没有这么高的请求，在词汇方面要能做到精确灵活运用。留意动宾调配，介宾调配和润饰准则等。在写作中不要过火寻求长句。许多考生以为长句的累加能够增加文章的文采。的确长句能够给人一种写作功底深沉的感受，不过试想一下，一篇文章读下来长句连篇，是不是会给人一种喘不过气的感受?过犹不及，一篇文章中长短句相结合，句式多变，很简单让一篇文章看上去轻松，生动。在文章思路方面，能够试着归类和总结。即是多多搜集各个方面的资料，积存在脑海中，这样在考试中遇到一个方面的标题就敏捷的在大脑中查找，信任能够节约不少的时刻。文章的构造组织必定要做到明晰。明晰的构造会使阅卷人留下一个好的印象。文章的期间方式一般是平衡式，倾向式和好事多磨式。能够挑选一个自个熟悉的格局来写。实践上多多记范文，对写作水平的提高是很有帮助的。着重句，插入语和倒装句是通往高分的三大捷径!接着上面的标题来剖析一下该篇文章：

　　At present, few schools locate in the region where my family, friends and I live. Since the construction of a new high school would has(have) both positive and negative effects on our community, it is truly a controversial problem whether to build up a new one or not. Over all I believe that such a project should be supported and encouraged as its net effect will be beneficial to the locality. Among numerous benefit(benefits) are easy accesses to good education, excellent sports facilities as well as the contribution to the local economy.

　　First, for students in our locality, they can obtain high education more easily. As things stand now, the students who live(live in) our community, unfortunately, have to travel a long distance to go to school. We can always see the images that high school students ride their bicycles, tiredly, to school in the early morning, since it takes them a long time to get there. This produces much more trouble for those busy students who still have heavy work loan. Well, a nearby high school will solve this problem very well.

　　In addition, children in the locality can attain easy access to many useful facilities such as library, sports implements. Now, in our community, we do not possess enough facilities for our children to exercise and learn more knowledge outside the class. However, after the school’s construction is completed, children can go doing sports including football, basketball, and ping-pong, in the school playground when it is weekends, that is, when students in the school have no classes.

　　Moreover, the net effects of the construction of a new school contribute a lot to the economy of our region. As the school set up, more shopping centers, bookstores will arise in the region near the school which is for the convenience of the students also benefit (benefits) the dwellers in the area. The government, then, can get more taxes, since more businesses are found.

　　Despite some minor undesirable side effects arising from such an establishment, such as more noise and heavier traffic, the construction of a high school is absolutely desirable and should be welcomed by all for it is conducive to both the locals and locality.

　　评语：

　　1. 文章构造完好，思路准确，条理明晰。

　　2. Since the construction of a new high school would has both positive and negative effects on our community, it is truly a controversial problem whether to build up a new one or not. 说出了疑问的矛盾点，言语很顺利!

　　3. Despite some minor undesirable side effects arising from such an establishment, such as more noise and heavier traffic, the construction of a high school is absolutely desirable and should be welcomed by all for it is conducive to both the locals and locality. 最终一段写的简练，言语流畅!

　　收尾期间：

　　通常在写好文章之后，都要留出一点时刻去查看文章的拼写和语法疑问。不要由于一些小错误而影响全体的分数，所以这一步必不可少。

　　上面是对独立写作的一些见地，写作仍是要经过很多操练，不断修正，按部就班的前进。