托福独立写作“无话可说”怎么办

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　　当咱们开端预备托福独立写作的时分，许多考生会晤临着一个疑问，即是“无话可说”，特别是假如遇到一个自个不了解的标题，加之时刻又紧，头脑就一片空白了，想到的也仅仅空泛的东西。在这种状况下，即便是中文也难以写好，更谈何用英语去表达呢。

　　对此办法即是要长于联想到一些详细的现实、详细的比如以及详细的景象。那么疑问来了，详细的现实、详细的比如以及详细的景象到底有哪些呢？考生们的心里是溃散的，人生过于平平，履历太少，书到用时方恨少，那么考生们该怎样来预备这些详细的比如呢？

　　咱们就拿《北极星》教材为例，来给咱们剖析一下怎样从往常的阅读中堆集托福写作资料～

　　写作

　　2008.8.3/2007.6.9 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisurely life.

　　写作思路

　　Main point: Disagree

　　Sub point1:作业压力比如今更大。

　　Sub point2:环境疑问更为严峻。

　　Sub point3:任何事物更新换代的速度更快，意味着20年以后咱们需求不断的学习，愈加尽力的去习惯年代的开展，不被年代所筛选，所以不是更休闲了，而是更累了。

　　论题有关内容

　　第三版北极星4 Unit5 ----Longevity: Too Much of a Good Thing?

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　　A doubled lifespan

　　If scientists could create a pill that let you live twice as long while remaining free of infirmities, would you take it?

　　If one considers only the personal benefits that longer life would bring, the answer might seem like a no-brainer : People could spend more quality time with loved ones; watch future generations grow up; learn new languages; master new musical instruments; try different careers or travel the world.

　　……

　　The workplace

　　For most people, living longer will inevitably mean more time spent working. Careers will necessarily become longer, and the retirement age will have to be pushed back, not only so individuals can support themselves, but to avoid overtaxing a nation’s social security system.

　　…

　　But such changes would carry their own set of dangers, critics say. Competition for jobs would become fiercer as “mid-life re-trainees” beginning new careers vie with young workers for a limited number of entry-level positions. Especially worrisome is the problem of workplace mobility, Callahan said. “If you have people staying in their jobs for 100 years, that is going to make it really tough for young people to move in and get ahead,” Callahan explained.

　　解说怎样运用

　　同学们留意，以上内容给了咱们十分好的资料（尤其是标绿有些）。当咱们要证实sub point1. 作业压力比如今更大。你能想到用啥方法来有用的论证呢？Maybe你会说以后咱们都是高学历者（well-educated），那么作业的竞争压力天然会更大。这个理由大有些同学都能想得到，那么怎样让你的资料对比novel? 赶忙学学以上阶段吧！！！

　　20年后咱们会变得愈加长命，这就意味着咱们的退休年龄push back了，在这种年轻人不断进入职场，而年长者推迟退休的状况下，是不是竞争压力要更大了呢？一起华章中许多expressions是咱们都能够学习的，eg. mid-life re-trainees人到中年再就业者；a limited number of entry-level positions有限的招聘岗位；

　　写作

　　2015.10.11 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　It is a waste of money for government to fund space travel and exploration.

　　写作思路

　　Main point: Disagree

　　Sub point1: 如今地球存在的疑问：环境污染越发严峻，能源日益减少，人员激增等。所以咱们有必要去探究国际，找到新的寓居地，发现新能源。

　　Sub point2: Space exploration是十分practical的一项出资，不能说是a waste of money.

　　Sub point3: 诚然当今社会还有许多没有处理的疑问需求政府来处理。这些疑问也许比国际探究、游览迫切多了，可是这并不意味着政府做这件工作即是浪费钱。由于假如政府不做就没有人有这个才能了。

　　论题有关内容

　　第四版北极星3 Unit3----Exploring the Red Planet

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　　MARS: OUR NEW HOME?

　　If you think you’d like to live on Mars, you may have that possibility by 2023. A Dutch company called Mars One will soon advertise for people interested in colonizing Mars. If you have all the necessary skills—and there are a lot—you could be one of the first colonists to Mars. Are you ready for the challenge?

　　…

　　As a future colonist in one of the six teams, you will go through years of training. If your team is the first team to travel to Mars, your main responsibility when you get there will be to build a place where humans can live. The atmosphere on Mars does not have enough oxygen for humans, and the land is not good enough to grow food. Colonists will have to create an artificial environment on Mars where there is air to breathe and land to farm. Scientists know Earth-like conditions can be simulated on Mars because something similar has already been done in Antarctica, where humans cannot survive outside the created environment.(对火星环境的详细描绘&科学家们怎样将其改造的合适人类寓居。)

　　Humans may have another problem in space as well. It takes nearly a year to get to Mars, so travelers would be without the Earth’s gravity for a long time. In addition, Mars One astronauts will not return to Earth. Their mission is to start a colony that can support itself. So, the colonists will live the rest of their lives there. When a human lives in an environment without gravity or with low gravity for a long time, the systems in the body weaken. For example, muscles and bones lose strength. The heart also gets weaker. The blood in the body gets thicker, and it becomes more difficult for the heart to push blood through the body. Luckily, spinning the spaceship can create artificial gravity, and artificial gravity can ease these problems.（关于状况：咱们的身体也许会遇到挑战，例如失重。）

　　It also will be difficult for Mars colonists to be isolated, far from home, living in small spaces, and seeing the same people over and over. It is important to come up with solutions to possible problems before anyone actually goes on a Mars mission. Colonists with depression could put the mission in danger. Fortunately, a few years ago, a joint Russian and European project called the Mars500 Mission took place. It studied people’s reactions to long-term space travel by following six astronauts in a Mars-like environment. The astronauts spent 520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. The six astronauts “returned” to the Earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. Scientists viewed the Mars500 Mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. Surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. The greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. （关于状况：在太空中咱们的心思也许会遇到啥挑战，会不会呈现心思疾病呢…）

　　解说怎样运用

　　关于这个论题，同学们脑海中应当会显现中一幅幅国际探究的画面，例如近期的《火星救援》（The Martian）信任咱们在这个论题上对比能达成一致，那即是政府花钱探究国际并非浪费钱的一种做法。

　　可是怎样解阐明白呢？思路现已给咱们了。如今咱们回到［Sub point2: Space exploration是十分practical的一项出资，不能说是a waste of money.］

　　同学们想一下，当咱们要证实国际探究的实效性、是有远景的，是不是应当展示给考官一个画面：在探究国际的过程中政府正在战胜一个个unavoidable 艰难，政府正在为寻觅下一个家乡而尽力着，所以怎样能叫浪费钱呢？！

　　想明白这点以后，不够哦！接下来怎样写呢？探究国际过程中详细会遇到啥难题呢？又是怎样去处理的呢？英文要怎样表述啊？感受许多专业术语不会讲，怎样办？！！！

　　同学们，那么请再细心看看以上华章中标绿的有些，是不是心中恍然大悟了呢，这篇文章几乎即是为托福写作量身定做的！

　　520 days in this environment and only had contact with their bosses and their families. The six astronauts “returned” to the Earth in good physical condition—and still talking to each other. Scientists viewed the Mars500 Mission as a great success because they were able to see how the astronauts handle emotional and physical stresses. Surprisingly, the greatest emotional problem was boredom. The greatest physical problems were not getting enough sleep and gaining too much weight. （关于状况：在太空中咱们的心思也许会遇到啥挑战，会不会呈现心思疾病呢…）

　　写作

　　2015.10.25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　In the past people were more friendly than they are today.

　　写作思路

　　Main point: Agree

　　Sub point1: 如今人日子节奏快，天天都十分繁忙，没啥时刻重视别人，天然不如曾经的人friendly。

　　Sub point2:当今社会诈骗做法许多，加上媒体的曝光，咱们的防备心思很强，对陌生人极端警觉；而曾经咱们对陌生人是对比友善的。

　　Sub point3:当然不能否定当今社会中仍然有许多friendly 的做法举措，许多人也极端warm-hearted.可是全体来说是曾经的人对比friendly。其中有个对比重要的要素是现代人相对selfish,尤其在我国 One-Child Policy的影响下,单身后代相对会对比自私。

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　　第四版北极星3 Unit2----The Consequences of Fraud

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　　(如下华章内容环绕思路中的sub point2打开)

　　同学们，你们如今看到的即是北极星3 Unit2----The Consequences of Fraud的引入有些。本来在这个版块咱们就能够学到许多单词： medical fraud(医疗诈骗), Internet fraud(网络诈骗)，Identity theft(身份盗窃)……这些表达在你的作文中都能够用到哦～接下来详细看一个华章~

　　TYPES OF FRAUD

　　（留意：这篇文章通篇可用，就不标示要点内容）

　　Fraud has been increasing around the world because of computer technology. One example is the Nigerian Bank Fraud. People are contacted by email and asked to help transfer money from Nigeria or other African countries by allowing the money to be placed temporarily in their bank accounts. The real motive is not to transfer money but to obtain personal banking information.（本段联系详细实例来阐明当今国际，计算机的广泛运用、网络的普及让Fraud影响更大。可作为sub point2的资料。）

　　Another type of computer fraud is known as “phishing,” or trying to obtain financial information by impersonating a bank employee. When this kind of fraud takes place, you receive email messages from someone pretending to represent your bank. You are then asked to provide your account number or other identifying information. This kind of deception seems so real that many people respond to it and give away their financial and personal information.（本段说到的网络诈骗，咱们是不是很了解呢？里边的表达phishing, impersonate, deception这些好用的词汇学到手了吗？）

　　The telephone is also used by con men and women who try to impress people with amazing prizes and offers. Sometimes they will call and ask for your banking information so that they can put prize money into your account. If you do not trust a person contacting you by phone, ask for his or her name, business phone number, and company address. You can then contact the company yourself to learn whether or not you have reason to be suspicious.（电话诈骗有碰到过吗？在咱们的平常日子中是不是很多见？这是不是让你不再那么信任陌生人了呢？“骗子”这个词能够用con men and women来表达，了解吗？所以本段内容也能够作为资料。）

　　Modern communications technology has made it easier for people to trick you with fake deals and requests for information. When you go online, you find many websites offering products and services such as medical treatment and legal advice. How can you know if something is real? Fortunately, there are many organizations that can help you make sure that companies and individuals are treating you with honesty. If you believe that you are involved in a case of fraud, be sure to report it and ask for help.

　　解说怎样运用

　　同学们，信任咱们看完全文会发现根本整个华章拿过来满是supporting materials.本来关于sub point2诈骗做法这点，同学们依据自个的阅历以及网络、报纸上的新闻都能够想到详细的比如，关键的是不知道怎样表达，所以上文关于添补咱们表达上空缺是十分有用的。

　　写作

　　2015.11.15 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities

　　写作思路

　　Main point: Disagree

　　Sub point1: Money越多在必定程度上意味着能协助越多的人，而当今社会还有许多人温饱疑问都处理不了，所以应当出更多的钱给慈悲机构。能够用Bill Gates的比如。

　　Sub point2:对本身也有好处，自个在协助别人的过程中能够非常好的知道自个，变得愈加高兴，愈加自傲，愈加知道生命的含义。

　　Sub point3:能够让这个国际愈加夸姣。许多疑问的呈现都是由于贫富差距过大致使的，假如富了以后会拿更多的钱出来协助别人，那么这个国际必将愈加夸姣。

　　论题有关内容

　　第三版北极星4 -Unit6----Give and Learn

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　　This 1979 Nobel Peace Prize winner spent many years working with the extremely poor in India. Though not a rich person, Mother Teresa was able to personally help thousands of people. disagree with the following statement? The more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities.

　　This business person is one of the richest people in the world. Bill Gates is also a very generous philanthropist and has created a foundation focusing on education and healthcare.

　　This movie star is reported to give away 1/3 of his/her income to several charities. Angelina Jolie is also the Goodwill Ambassador for the United Nations High Commission for Refugees.

　　This wealthy talk show host has created a foundation “to support the education and empowerment of women, children and families”. Oprah Winfrey has also established a school for girls in South Africa.

　　解说怎样运用

　　这篇文章的打开需求有大量的实例来阐明做慈悲是必要的，本单元中的Angelina Jolie, Oprah Winfrey, Bill Gates, Mother Teresa都是慈悲的好比如。

　　结语

　　托福写作时“无话可说”乃是由于平常缺少资料堆集，输入太少呐。关于资料，同学们要留意以下几点：一是资料最好是英文表达，否则考试时，即便心中满满的比如写的时分却发现许多意思不知怎样用英文表达；二是资料在表达上不宜太难，否则难以理解和回忆。三是好的资料要了解到位，同学们面临好的资料不能仅仅记在簿本上或是存在电脑中，必定要记在脑子里！怎样断定现已记在脑子里了呢？找个一起考托福的小伙伴，把比如用英文讲一遍给他/她听；或许找张纸，写一遍。当你说完或许写完，对方听了或许看了惊叹你的表达或许比如好棒时，阐明你是真的把握了这个比如！否则没有记在脑子里，再好的资料也是徒然~