辛达托福代报名提醒您:需要托福代报名的同学们,及时联络咱们哈~~
大家好,今天是2021年12月14日.我们来一起聊一聊托福优秀作文欣赏。
我们中国的学生在写作上的分数一般在18-22分之间比较多。怎们首要的优点在于文章结构清楚,以及一些词汇运用比较到位。可是问题却产生在审题不行、文章逻辑短少、拓展内容和短少实例,还有就是语句的写作水平不高。不是太短、就是无法驾御长难句。可是经过培训的学生一般都可以比均匀分数高。但然,终究的得分与个人的尽力,以及学校专业写作教师的面对面经验分不开。
下面辛达小编给咱们整理了新托福高分范文供大家欣赏和参看,希望考生们能从中取得构思,创作出优异的新托福作文。
What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The kitchen is my favorite room in a house, because it is where families gather. To me, that is the most important thing. So many of the memories people have of growing up revolve around the kitchen. My childhood memories concern the kitchens in my grandparents' homes.
My mother's family lived in a row house in the city. The rooms were all small, and that included the kitchen. In the summertime, when we'd visit, the back door of the house would, be left open. People would be sitting on the back porch and in the kitchen, talking and laughing, while my grandmother made dinner. There was no air-conditioning, but I don't ever remember feeling too hot. There was always a breeze coming through, along with the sounds of traffic and kids playing ball in the street.
My father's family lived on a farm in the country, and their house had a huge kitchen with windows on three sides. It seems like the windows were always open and the curtains blowing with the breeze. The main door to the house was almost never used. Everyone came in through the kitchen, and sat at the big table in the middle of the room. When dinner was being prepared, all the women would bustle around, while the men sat at the table talking about farm prices. Sometimes my grandmother wouldn't even sit down during dinner, but would be refilling bowls of food and people's glasses. From outside, we could hear the cows in the field near the house.
These two kitchens are the background for some of my happiest memories. From the beginning of time, human beings have gathered together near the fire where the food was being prepared. I hope that never changes.
以上就是这篇托福写作。仅供参看,辛达小编并不支持模板方式的写作,由于阅卷的人也知道有模板这个东西的,辛达小编建议应该从思维上改变去写作文,就是用美式思主见写作文。即典型“总---分---总”的写作思维。在新托福写作中,用这种思维最简单取得高分。
辛达托福代报名提醒您:需要托福代报名的同学们,及时联络咱们哈~~
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