辛达托福代报名提醒您：需要托福代报名的同学们，及时联络咱们哈~~

大家好，今天是2021年11月20日.咱们来一同聊一聊托福精彩范文欣赏。

新托福的考试写作如果我们考生想拿高分，脑子里必定要有几篇精彩的文章，背上几篇好范文，能以备不时只需。其实托福写作是中国考生的弱项，只要在日常日子中多读些范文，了解托福写作中的逻辑思维，才可更好的进行练习。我们并不主张考生死记范文，考试时假设遇到类似标题照搬上去，下面我们一起欣赏这篇托福写作范文，仅供参考哟！

In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Nowadays, more and more communities for old people are founded everywhere all over the world. When you walk in a department store, you will find that more and more products for old people have been put on the shelves. The population of old people in the world is growing rapidly, and the reason is people are living longer now. There are several explanations for this phenomenon.

First, under the development of science and technology, it’s obviously the standards of living have been improved a lot. People work less and relax more these days than ten years ago. More entertainment has also been provided, hence people have more chances to entertain and keep a good mood everyday, which is essential for being healthy and living longer.

Moreover, highly developed health system is another significant factor for people to live for a long time. As the governments put more fund for health expenditure, more people are saved from the torture of illness.

Further more, the improvement in medicine also plays an important role. There’s an undeniable fact that after people discovered the mysteries of gene, more and more newly developed medicine cured a lot of illness that can’t be cured before. Besides all these explanations we discussed above, there are also many other reasons. But the main causes of people’s longer life is the development of science and technology, efficient health system and improvement in medicine.

这并不能成为绝对的考生写作能力。而且从例子的选择上讲，并不要求使用庞大、复杂的例子，尽管这些例子可能论证力更强。个人经历就是一种很好写的例子。阅卷人并不依据论据的复杂性来看写作。新托福考试写作多背一些范文，可以堆集一些材料，像好的短语、词、句等，灵活的运用。

辛达托福代报名提醒您：需要托福代报名的同学们，及时联络咱们哈~~