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如动物→鸟类,现代交通方法→飞机,上面的举例是最简略的方式,即对单个词/短语,或说单个目标举例。咱们在独立写作中会遇到对单个目标的举例,这也是咱们都能做好的;但咱们更常遇到的是需求对一个句子,或说多个目标互相联络而串成的观念举例的状况,这时咱们就需求留心咱们所举的比如的有效性了。
托福写作举例的基本准则:
a. 细节性准则----细于被举例者。
b. 共同性准则----杰出表现与要用举例证实的观念的共同对应联络,观念中的要点信息应在比如中不多不少地表现。
新托福写作真经介绍的举例的详细操作方法:
粗举,细举,引查询,列数字。
(1)粗例----粗暴的比如
“粗例”即一类人、物或事,或一个公认事实的比如,说白了即是多数人都能认可的信息。寻找这类比如的时候对比轻松,只要在观念中找出能够继续细化的要点信息然后"narrow down"就能够了。
观念1: Employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants.
粗例1: International companies desire bilingual employees and offer higher salaries to attract them.
“粗例”能够树立“面”对“线”的联络,但需求留意不能太空泛,一起也要操控运用的量;粗比如需求调配因果剖析、对比证明来运用,才能使全部段落更有血肉。
(2)细例----详尽的比如
“细例”即是详细到一个人、一个物,或一件事,可所以实践存在的,也能够惹是生非。这类比如使托福写作愈加鲜活,更有说服力,通常也能占有更长一些的篇幅,平常有意识地积累并灵活联络,写起这类比如来才会愈加得心应手。
a. 实践存在的,一方面,这类比如可所以身边,家人、兄弟、自个和身边发作的一些工作;另一方面即是名人和一些被报导出来的“名事”了
观念2: Mistakes serve as vivid, sometimes painful deterrents from certain action.
细例2: A friend of mine suffering from smoking-induced lung disease would remember the emotional and physical pain associated with the side-effects of tobacco usage. Not only does he recall the smell of hospitals, the imprint of pain on the face of someone who died from smoking, but he would also link these memories immediately with cigarettes.
观念3: You cannot judge a person only by his or her appearance.
细例3: Susan Boyle is one of those. Such an appearance has long been rumored, but her incredible voice and stunning performance on BGT has won her great popularity.
b. 此外,"细例"的惹是生非即是假定证明,常用if,supposing等最初。
观念4: Individuals play a significant role in alleviating traffic congestion.
细例4: If 30 people get on a public bus instead of 30 individual cars, there will be far fewer automobiles on the road, greatly easing the traffic burden.
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