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托福写作考试作为一种言语测试方法，其要点在于考察考生的英言语语水平，对语篇要素的掌握在写作托福作文的进程傍边无疑是至关重要的。娴熟恰本地运用语篇要素会令你的作文妙笔生花，与众不同。

托福写作中用词禁绝确是很容易犯的缺点，good，terrible，see，nice，kind，greatly，think，know，something等词汇在学生作文中重复出现。这些词自身并没有疑问，是英语常用词，可是它们表达的意思过于含糊，许多情况下，应当运用意义愈加精确的词。何况，学生老是运用这几个词会给人以表达形式单调，托福写作词汇量匮乏，文章缺少感染力的形象。下面的一些比如，经过换用一、两个精确生动的词语或是运用一些固定搭配及习语就使全部语句增色不少。

1.Original: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social experience and help you to understand other people’s feelings and learn to be kind.

Revised: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrich your social experience and help you to understand other people’s feelings and learn to be considerate.

亮点分析

add，kind表达的意义都比较广泛。add可以指数量上的添加，也可以指程度的加强，关于“丰厚经验、添加常识”这个意思，用enrich会使表达更精确。kind从字面意义上讲是“好的、仁慈的”，用kind来形容人无法详细地表现出一个人的性格特征究竟如何，原句中是想表达“考虑周到、无微不至”的特色，要精确表达这个意义应挑选considerate。

2. Original: Science and technology have greatly influenced our lives and our society is changing very rapidly.

Revised: Science and technology have come to pervade every aspect of our lives and, as a result, society is changing at a speed which is quite unprecedented.

亮点分析

greatly，rapidly归于常用词，表明程度高、速度快，这么的词在表达作用上不行详细，缺少说服力，在修改后的语句中用了pervade every aspect of our lives就详细生动地表现出科技的影响力究竟有多大，其影响力已渗透到咱们日子的方方面面，at a speed which is quite unprecedented意为“以一种前所未有的速度”，形象地道出了改变速度之快。

3. Original: Young people tend to think that real life is as nice and interesting as it is in the novels and movies, while more experienced adults think this kind of naive daydream will only be destroyed by later experiences and every one should learn to get used to common everyday life.

Revised: Young people tend to think that real life is as dramatic and fascinating as it is in the novels and movies, while more experienced adults think this kind of naive daydream will only be destroyed by later experiences and every one should learn to get used to tedious everyday life.

亮点分析

nice，interesting，common都归于一般词汇，用到语句中也显得平平苍白。nice的意思是“好的，令人开心的”，interesting是“风趣的”，这两个词都不能精确地描绘出年轻人所神往的美好日子，句中想表达的是年轻人以为日子好像小说、电影一般充溢戏曲改变，激动人心，要表现这层意义应当用dramatic，fascinating。dramatic表明“影响的，戏曲性的，给人深入形象的”，fascinating表明“具有激烈吸引力的，诱人的，使人颠三倒四的”，这两个词的程度要比nice，interesting深得多，表现力也更强。原句用common表达实践的现实日子的单调无味是禁绝确的，common的意思是“一般的，平常的”，一般平常的东西纷歧定是单调的，tedious是表明“(因过长、过慢或单调)令人厌倦的，烦人的”，刚好传达出现实日子由于琐碎和重复而变得索然无味这种意义。

4. Original: You should compete to live in this society.

Revised: You should compete for survival; otherwise, you will be thrown out of the tide of society.

亮点分析

原句平平平淡，仅仅通知人们要在社会安身，必须竞赛，但这么一句简略的劝说好像缺少说服力，修改后的语句用了compete for survival，为了生存而竞赛，并且后边又添加了一个并排分句，弥补阐明了假如不compete的结果即是be thrown out of the tide of society，被社会的浪潮所筛选，运用这些愈加详细深入的词汇可以形象生动地表现出竞赛的惨烈。

5.Original: I really believe that smoking is harmful to people’s health.

Revised: I have a profound conviction that smoking is harmful to people’s health.