托福独立写作高分范文赏析177


时间:2020/10/9
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托福写作的标题类型很广触及话题品种繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完整没思绪不晓得如何展开的搅扰。为了防止大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,下面小编就来分享托福写作各类难点标题的写作思绪解析和高分满分范文。

 

托福写作难点话题一览

 

Do you like a large shopping center being built in your neighborhood?

 

It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

 

写作思绪展开构造剖析

 

这道标题的关键点有两个,分别是large以及in your neighborhood,既然是开在社区里的大商场,那么势必会带来商业繁荣的影响,往好了说以后本人买东西会更便当,社区会更繁华更有生机。往不好的方向展开则能够说社区的安静氛围会受影响变得愈加吵闹,同时平安性以及交通出行方面也可能会遭到影响。大家喜不喜欢都能够找到展开的点。

 

本话题高分范文赏析

 

While the proponents of the plan to build a large shopping center in my community believe that it will aid economic development, I think that it will possibly do irreparable harm to our neighborhood. The proposed shopping center will damage existing businesses, provide inferior products, and destroy the environment of our peaceful community.

 

Research indicates that companies with less than 50 workers employ more people and generate more revenue as a percentage of a nation's GDP than large-scale corporations. This is true in America, where small businesses are considered the engine of the economy, as it is in our community where many people own and operate small shops. Large stores can buy large quantities of goods at wholesale prices. While local grocery, that cannot buy products in bulk, will be unable to compete. Once the competition is gone, the large store can raise its prices and lower its employee's wages. This classic example of exploitative monopoly capitalism impoverishes a community while enriching a small number of people.

 

The goods sold at the shopping center would be mass produced and necessarily of inferior quality to the handcrafted local goods and freshly grown local produce. Cheap products like plastic furniture would lack the character and local flavor of traditional wooden furniture made right here in our town. Cheaply mass-produced food,laden with pesticides and chemical preservatives, would crowd out the healthier, fresher, and tastier local produce on the shelves of the large shopping center. Low prices from the large store might tempt local consumers to eat less healthy food, endangering the health of local people as well as harming the incomes of local farmers and shopkeepers.

 

Lastly, I must point out that a large shopping center might bring unwelcome development to our small community. Ugly and noisy roads and parking lots would need to be constructed. The volume of people wanting to buy things at the new shopping center would worsen the traffic situation, which is already bad. Pollution from cars and trucks already has a notably degrading effect on the local air-quality and this is also bound to become worse as the traffic to and from the shopping center increases.

 

以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思绪解析和高分范文分享,希望可以给各位同窗提供一些参考,协助大家拓展写作思绪,为托福写作考试做好充沛准备。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。


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