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很多刚入门的同窗都迷茫托福写作应该怎样开端练，小编为大家请来了经历丰厚的教师，细致解读如何从托福写作的得分要点动手，修正出一篇好文章。

TOEFL写作考试方式

托福写作考试分为两个局部：

1. 综合写作(Integrated Writing)：阅读一段230-300 words的文段，请求3mins内完成，然后听一段230-300 words 的听力。完成后，给20 mins写一篇200-300 words的文章，请求论述阅读、听力内容以及两者之间的关系。

2. 独立写作(Independent Writing)：给30 mins 请求完成一篇300 words以上的文章。标题为特定题库。

TOEFL写作考试请求

笔者分离多年教学经历、官方请求、以及数千篇文章修改经历，总结罗列出托福写作考试的得分要点如下：

1. 有效地应对任务;

2. 言语运用纯熟，无过多语法、拼写和标点运用错误;

3. 组织构造好，展开话题完善;

4. 运用解释，举例等论证办法;

5. 有效地停止文字处置，整合与递进;

6. 语法具有多样性;

7. 用词合理并且地道。

上述7点能做到1,2的同窗，写作根本达标，能够拿到一个15-20分的成果;

上述7点能做到1,2,3,4,5的同窗，写作程度较好，能够取得21-25分的成果;

上述7点全部做到的同窗，能够或得26分以上直至满分的分数。

TOEFL作文修正实战

下面一段文字是我的学生在TOEFL独立写作的一个自然段。在这里给大家逐句从根底语法方面剖析一下，主要处理写作请求中的第1,2两个点。这篇习作的标题是：

People are now easier to become educated than in the past.

①First, people in now would have a better education because there are more teachers than the past.②This can largely decide how students be educated.③For example, in the past, it is common that one teacher teach many subjects like math, Chinese, English and so on.④Now however, in one school there are many teachers who teach one subject.⑤In this way, it can develop the quality of the teaching section and the practice part.⑥Think about it, if a teacher teaches 8 classes, and he has to correct the homework every day, how well he can perform when he works on the last part of homework.⑦In contrast if the teacher only need to correct homework from 2 classes, how well can he do?⑧There are still many examples for this.⑨From the example, we can clearly see that how can the number of teachers decide the quality of education.

逐句修正：

①“now”前面是不用介词停止修饰的，因而需求去掉“in”.

同时缘由状语从句中的“than”比拟双方也是不对称的。这里有2种改动办法，其一将比拟对称，其二停止逻辑变换。所以，单纯从语法角度讲，笔者以为改成下面的表述会更好一些。

First, people now would have a better education because there are fewer teachers in the past.

②第二句中的“be”不契合从句语法规则，应改成are。

同时，这个决议作者更倾向于描绘教育的优劣，而非方式，所以认真剖析，其实原文并没有表述分明。因而，第二句表述为：This can largely decide how well students are educated.

③“in the past”与“is”矛盾，需求修正。另外，“in the past”的位置也是值得商榷的。同时“teach”的语法还有争议，倡议运用“would”，可防止费事。

另，笔者在美国的教师经常通知笔者，英美人士不经常在essay中运用and so on等口语用词。

综上，第三句改为：For example, it was common that one teacher would teach many subjects like math, Chinese and English in the past.

④本句错误有两个，其一是词语在句子中的位置不契合英文造句法，这是最严重的，而且也是第③句中呈现的问题。另外，用词反复上句的用词，应予互换。

⑤第五句的衔接方式如①和②两句，如能改动衔接方式，句式则会表现变化性。

综上，第四句和第五句改为：

However, there are many teachers focusing on one subject, which can develop the quality of the teaching section and the practice part.

⑥显然，由于第六句内容较多，学生没有控制住句子，致使第六句呈现致命的多谓语现象。

既然无法用复合句表达，就要果断的将句子断开。

另外，就笔者经历而言，宾语从句中特殊疑问词的表述具有客观心情，倡议变换成客观描绘性语句。综上，第六句拆解为：

A case in point is a teacher teaching 8 classes. He has to correct the homework every day, and would not perform as good as the first assignment he corrected.

⑦依然是句式变话的问题。

其二，介词短语后面的标点也要留意，虽然不是必需的。

笔者调整为:

In contrast, if the teacher only needs to work for 2 classes, he might possibly comment concretely and exactly the students’ homework.

⑧无误。

⑨介词短语能够添加“above”。

宾语从句后面应为陈说句式。

笔者调整为: From the example above, we can clearly see that how the number of teachers could decide the quality of education.

修正后的文章呈现为：

First, people now would have a better education because there are fewer teachers in the past. This can largely decide how well students are educated. For example, it was common that one teacher would teach many subjects like math, Chinese and English in the past. However, there are many teachers focusing on one subject now, which can develop the quality of the teaching section and the practice part. A case in point is a teacher teaching 8 classes. He has to correct the homework every day, and would not perform as good as the first assignment he corrected. In contrast, if the teacher only needs to work for 2 classes, he might possibly comment concretely and exactly the students’ homework. There are still many examples for this. From the example above, we can clearly see that how the number of teachers could decide the quality of education.

虽然经修正后这个段落尚有很多缺乏之处，例子的选取、词语的选择、连接性等方面还有待改善，但我以为这样的文章拿到20分是没有问题的。希望大家首先朝这个程度努力，依照7点请求，一个点一个点的锻炼，那么写作30分就不是问题。

小编找到的是作者的一些见解，希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中，适合自己的方法就是最好的方法，希望对大家有所帮助。最后，辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平，取得更好的成绩。

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