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托福独立写作审题很重要,审不好题很有可能会招致文章写跑题或者偏题。托福写作中综合写作曾经限定了写作内容,所以跑题偏题的概率很低,但是独立写作却只需求依据标题自在发挥,固然是自在发挥,但也要在标题限定的大范围之内,万不可想到哪里写到哪里。下面,我们一同来剖析一下托福独立写作审题2大误区。
托福独立写作审题误区一 没留意关键词
同窗们考写作考了这么多年,大多数出题的方式都已烂熟于心,看到标题之后觉得熟习于是兴冲冲提笔就写,其实,这种看似“纯熟”的表象下藏着宏大的隐患——同窗们很有可能由于看得太快而疏忽某个决议标题意义的关键词。例如:
例1:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the only main cause for people’s unhealthy eating habits.
看到这个标题,同窗们立即会开端想,有没有other reasons for unhealthy habits,想出三条
如:1. People’s tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours;
2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on “endless diets”;
3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever.
综上所述,advertising is not the only cause.
这个写法看起来十分完备,但其实犯了一个不起眼却严重的错误——标题不是要我们证明it is not the only cause,而是要我们去证明it is not the only main cause。多一个“main”,意义是很不一样的。假如我们只需求证明it is not the only cause,那么找出other causes即可即例1中的写法。但是,假如我们要证明it is not the only main cause,就需求证明other causes that we mentioned are also main causes,这就需求在每一段中加上一些特地的阐明。或者,更简单的方法是去证明advertising is not even a cause, 直接在每段的末尾加上advertising与该段所阐述的unhealthy eating habit无关的阐述即可。If it is not a cause, how can it be the only main cause? 这样一来,就不用经过证明还有其他main cause来反驳了,事实上,证明某种cause是main cause还是挺有难度的,因而笔者引荐同窗们用后一种方式停止阐述。因而,文章还是disagree,而三段的主题句分别应该是:
1.People’s tight schedules do not allowthem to eat at regular hours, and it is obvious that they are too busy to be influenced by advertising;
2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on “endless diets”, and this is more like a result of human nature, the pursuit of beauty, but not advertising;
3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever, and it is quite clear that no advertisingencourages them to do so.
例2:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges and universities should offer more preparation for student before they start working.
看到这个标题,很多同窗会可能会这样写:Agree. 1. Students should take more specialized courses (专业课)in order to be knowledgeable and skillful enough for their future careers(接着开端阐述being knowledgeable and skillful的重要性); 2. Participating in internships helps students to have a clearer picture of their vocational development in the future(接着开端阐述假如没有实过习,在工作的时分是多么地feel so unprepared); 3. Attending more club activities is an effective way to improve social skills, which are crucial for success both in life and at work(接着开端阐述good social skills对职业和生活的协助).
假如不看括号里的内容,仅看主题句,这篇文章是没有任何问题的。但是,括号中的阐述从严厉意义上来讲,是不能支持“more”这个关键词的。举个简单的例子:“我们需求钱”和“我们需求更多钱”在证明的时分重点是不一样的。假如证明“我们需求钱”,应该细致论述钱的“不可或缺性”,比方生活、学习、教育都需求钱;但是假如证明“我们需求更多钱”,重点则应该放在“钱不够”的阐述上,证明在学习、生活、教育方面的预算都很慌张。同样地,上面的标题中仅仅证明Knowledge for careers, field experience and social skills are important是不够的,事实上,这些基本不需求证明,需求证明的事情是graduates today are not well prepared in the three aspects. 因而这篇文章应该是一篇“埋怨型”的文章,细致地去阐述学校工作的缺乏。参考思绪如下:Agree. 1. Many students today complain that they cannot learn practical skills and up-to-date information, for some of their teachers are not qualified enough to teach specialized courses; 2. Since many students are not allowed enough time to participate in internship programs before graduation, they know very little about what their future jobs like; 3. Joining clubs is possible for every college student, yet not every club provide is capable of offering enough opportunities for students to practice their social skills.
同窗们在写文章的时分一定要留意,学术论文写作不是句型和辞藻的堆砌,整篇文章一定是一个well-organized system,这个system中很重要的准绳之二就是——1、每个中间段的topic sentence是用来支持main idea的;2、topic sentence后面的每句话都是用来支持该topic sentence的。在上面的两个例子中,大家会发现例1的错误主要是main idea没有很好地被topic sentence支持;而例2的错误在于topic sentence固然看起来是支持main idea的,但是阐述的内容可能跟关键词“more”无关,从而不能有力地支持topic sentences。这些错误的原因,则是对题干中关键词的疏忽。
托福独立写作审题误区一 关键词了解不精确
与疏忽关键词的人不同,有些同窗过于执着于关键词的字面意义,而没能看出其背后的implication,从而被关键词限制住思绪,无法下笔。比起疏忽关键词,这种错误更常发作在仔细且实力不错的同窗身上,也很值得大家留意。笔者倡议,在写文章的时分要灵敏,不要拘泥于关键词的字面意义,否则理由很不好想,就算想出来也很难用英文表达。例如:
例3:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on elementary school education than on university education.
标题的意义是说,比起投资大学教育,政府应该在小学教育上投入更多的资金。看到这个题,同窗们会有不同的见地,大致来讲无非是两种——以为university education应该花更多的钱或反之。但是,大家很快会发现证明任何一种观念都是不容易的。比方说,有些同窗可能会这样写:Agree. 1. Elementary school education involves more students than university education and it requires more money; 2. Colleges and universities have more sponsors than elementary schools so that the government should offer more financial support for the latter.3. Since elementary school education is the cornerstone of university education, it deserves more money from the government.
上面的主题句看起来是没有问题的,但是在展开的时分艰难重重——个点里说Pupils的数量多所以花钱多,这确实是事实,可是pupil人均所需求的经费却肯定比university students少,最关键的是,我们并没有数据作为支撑;第二点里说校友或社会人士的支持使得大学在财政便当面比小学要宽裕的多,但是,这还是一个没有数据就无法证明的观念;第三点里说elementary school education是university education的根底所以前者就应当比后者得到更多的预算,这是一个典型的逻辑错误,因而在段落展开的时分将会非常艰难。A是B的根底并不意味着要为A花更多的钱。总之,钱自身就是一个能够量化的东西,假如真的以钱的几来写这道题,在没有数据支持的状况下是很难成文的。许多同窗之所以在写的时分觉得本人的文章很牵强,就是由于把该文当成了阐述题,而大家要晓得,阐述题都是要会给出数据让我们来剖析的。那么,在没有数据的状况下,这种标题该怎样写呢?找到money后面的implication很重要。其实,标题并不是要我们去讨论哪种教育应该花更多的钱,而是让我们去比照两种教育的重要性,自然地,愈加重要的教育就应该花更多的钱。所以我们能够有以下阐述:
(Main idea) I cannot agree that the government should spend more money on elementary school education than on university education, because they are equally important.
(Topic sentence) 1. Elementary school education prepares children for college education by teaching them how to learn and what they are supposed to learn.
总而言之,托福独立写作审清标题的关键在于把握好标题中的关键词,不管是了解错误还是疏忽关键词都有可能会招致作文写跑题。倡议大家在开端写托福独立写作之前先读标题,找到关键词,肯定透彻了解以后再开端列大纲准备写作。
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