托福写作高分范文:社区里建新的高校


时间:2020/4/7
作者:辛达托福代报名小编
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托福写作遭遇生疏话题缺乏思绪是比拟让人头疼的一件事,考试中假如遇到本人完整不晓得怎样写的标题可能会严重影响大家的发挥和心态。因而,考生需求在写作备考中就开端多接触各类作文话题理解写法思绪,多读一些高分范文提早停止铺垫。下面小编就为大家带来托福写作难点话题的思绪解析和高分范文赏析。

 

托福写作难点话题一览

 

Do you like a new high school being built in your community?

 

It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

 

写作思绪展开构造剖析

 

说到教育的话题普通以支持为主比拟容易拓展思绪。大家能够说教育是权宜之计(a fundamental task crucial for generations to come),当然要同意。 社区的孩子就近上学很便当,减少了路上可能发作交通事故的可能性; 能够进步社区文化气氛(将有更多的书店,音像店); 进而促进社区经济繁荣;进步就业率等等。 虽然社区可能变得喧闹一些,但是总体上还是应该支持的。

 

本话题高分范文赏析

 

The basic prerequisite of success for any community is the education of its citizens. Because the advantages of a high school education in my town are presently available to only a limited number of students every year, I wholeheartedly support the construction of a new school facility to serve our community. The competition to get into high school in my town is fierce. There are three middle schools in town, but only one high school. Because the number of applicants to the single high school far exceeds the available spaces in the high school, only the richest and most qualified students are able to go to school. The skills taught in high school including advanced math, analysis, and high-level reading and writing are important to every citizen, no matter what profession they later choose. Even if they are manual laborers, the ability to critically analyze problems taught in high school will make them better and more highly skilled workers. Beyond teaching practical skills to more local children, another high school will give children more opportunity to attend college. Holding a college degree is almost the only way a person can be assured of getting a stable, high paying job. Even a degree from a two or three year junior college can mean the ability to make a salary thousands of yuan annually higher than a high school diploma. Because our current high school is so small, many bright children with promising college careers ahead of them have no way of even obtaining the high school diploma! We must make sure the road to higher education remains open for as many young people as possible. Finally, if we cannot afford to open this high school, our town will have a serious problem with the number of unemployed youths who graduate from middle school with nothing to do. If they cannot find good jobs, they might be tempted to commit crimes, use drugs, or, if they are girls, engage in prostitution. Giving these children another option would both save them and help society.

 

以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思绪解析和高分范文分享,希望可以给各位同窗提供一些参考,协助大家拓展写作思绪,为托福写作考试做好充沛准备。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。


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