托福独立写作高分范文赏析7


时间:2020/3/30
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托福写作的标题类型很广触及话题品种繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完整没思绪不晓得如何展开的搅扰。为了防止大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,下面小编就来分享托福写作各类难点标题的写作思绪解析和高分满分范文,本期作文话题为:速食方式改动生活。

 

托福写作难点话题一览

 

The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near your community.

 

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

 

写作思绪展开构造剖析

 

大家能够先讨论“假定工厂真的落成了,而带来的益处和害处”,然后发表见地。从益处来说,考生能够写直接增加了就业时机(到工厂去上班);间接增加了就业时机(会有很多效劳业,比方饭店、商店、超市等等跟着开业)。假如工厂范围足够大,物流范围也足够大,那么将最终成为交通改善的起点。另外大的工厂能够交纳很多税,对中央财政有益处,进而促进社区的繁荣等等。从害处来写,大家则能够写会带来各种污染,比方,噪音、废气、污水,或是工厂不一定会赢利对社区起不到促进作用等等。

 

本话题高分范文赏析

 

I live in a primarily agricultural community, and most of the population lives hand to mouth. Parents keep children home from school to work in the fields. If there is a flood or a drought, people starve. A new factory would mean regular monthly salaries as well as protection against natural disasters or a sudden drop in the price of our main agricultural product, say, corn. Regular salaries would allow families the confidence to make investments in their futures. The locals would be able to plan their finances accurately and free themselves from debt. This in turn would encourage entrepreneurship and further develop the local economy. People could begin to open shops, restaurants, dormitories, and entertainment facilities to serve the factory workers with their savings. Profits from these small enterprises would further enrich the local community and turn our relatively poor farmland into a truly profitable development zone. Perhaps more parents could then afford to send all of their children to high school and maybe even college. There would certainly be negative effects as well. If the area becomes prosperous, immigrants from poorer regions will come here looking for work. Because of their relative poverty they will work harder for less money than the locals and drive wages down. There might be more immigrants than factory jobs available, leading to an unemployment crisis with a rising crime rate as a potential negative side effect. On the other hand, the proposed factory would almost certainly have adverse effects on the local environment, particularly in regards to polluting the water. This is perhaps the most serious concern, because without clean water the area cannot sustain life of any kind, com, livestock, or human. However, because of the relatively desperate economic situation of my hometown, I believe the potential benefits of opening a new factory would outweigh the risks. If we take the proper precautions, such as imposing strict environmental standards and providing adequate social services for immigrants, the whole area stands to benefit.

 

以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思绪解析和高分范文分享,希望可以给各位同窗提供一些参考,协助大家拓展写作思绪,为托福写作考试做好充沛准备。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。


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