托福独立写作高分范文赏析2


时间:2020/3/29
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托福写作的标题类型很广触及话题品种繁多,有些话题考生初看之下会有完整没思绪不晓得如何展开的搅扰。为了防止大家直到考试当中才遭遇这种问题,下面小编就来分享托福写作各类难点标题的写作思绪解析和高分满分范文,本期作文话题为:速食方式改动生活。

 

托福写作难点话题一览

 

Does luck have anything to do with success?

 

“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

 

写作思绪展开构造剖析

 

首先标题里的nothing to do有点太过极端了。很明显是出题者给大家挖的坑,即便同意这个观念考生也不能太过武断,要防止观念太过绝对和偏颇。所以倡议大家选择的态度是不能完整同意也不能完整不同意,假如要同意立场尽量维持在“很大水平上同意”会比拟好。考生能够指出luck的确存在,然后展开说可能招致人们胜利的若干缘由:老实、睿智、诙谐;固执;肯于做不喜欢的事情等等。

 

本话题高分范文赏析

 

Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. "It had killed several people, even hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. "I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. "As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasn't bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. "But by some miracle, you see, I hit it. I don't know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock. "I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I knew I didn't deserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn't be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I'd just be dead. I'm not a big man, just a lucky one." You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success.

 

When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonder it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don't know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case, hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itself is of no hope, and lack of luck should not be an excuse to failure.

 

以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作难点话题思绪解析和高分范文分享,希望可以给各位同窗提供一些参考,协助大家拓展写作思绪,为托福写作考试做好充沛准备。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。


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