托福独立口语高频话题:志愿者帮助老人


时间:2019/10/9
作者:辛达托福代报名小编
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考生在备考独立口语经常会遇到的一个问题是缺乏专业靠谱的权威人士来为本人修改答案。大家可能练习了不少独立口语话题,但由于缺乏有效修改,就连本人也不晓得练习到底有没有效果。下面小编就来为大家分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业修改。


本期托福独立口语高频话题


What would you like to do when you work as a volunteer to help elderly people?


学生对此话题的表述答案


If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Because, firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talent of old people. Many old people have great talent, some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have an opportunity to show that talent. It will make them more confident and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, If I throw a party for them. They will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Because old people are always very lonely. They really need someone to be their side and to listen to them.


资深讲师修改意见


发音局部需留意的几个词(Pronunciation)


1 party


2 colorful


语法方面呈现的错误(Grammar)


1 Because, firstly————Firstly


2 Because old people————Old people


表达局部存在的问题(Expression)


1 some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well.————some of them can sing or dance very well


2 are always very lonely————can get very lonely


此高频话题高分口语模板分享


If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talents of old people. Many old people have great talents, some of them can sing or dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have a place to show their talents. It will make them more confident, and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, if I throw a party for them, they will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Old people can get very lonely. They really need someone to be at their side and to listen to them.


以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师修改剖析,希望能为大家带来一些独立口语答复方面的协助。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。


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