托福独立口语高频话题:儿童教育谁的责任重?


时间:2019/10/9
作者:辛达托福代报名小编
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考生在备考独立口语经常会遇到的一个问题是缺乏专业靠谱的权威人士来为本人修改答案。大家可能练习了不少独立口语话题,但由于缺乏有效修改,就连本人也不晓得练习到底有没有效果。下面小编就来为大家分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业修改。


本期托福独立口语高频话题


Who should be more responsible for children's education, schools or parents?


学生对此话题的表述答案


Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations. For me, that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations. First, that childrens spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge. And therefore, I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.


资深讲师修改意见


语法方面呈现的错误(Grammar)


1 educations————education


2 childrens spend————children spend


3 children is————children are


4 and therefore————Therefore


表达局部存在的问题(Expression)


1 for childrens education (delete)


2 For me, I think————I think


3 and teach the knowledge————and be knowledgable


此高频话题高分口语模板分享


Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education, I think that the school should be more responsible. First, children spend a large amount of time in school, and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable. Therefore, I think the children are more influenced by the schools. Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.


以上就是小编为大家分享的托福独立口语高频话题的学生解答和资深讲师修改剖析,希望能为大家带来一些独立口语答复方面的协助。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式。这些资料大家可以作为参考吸收到自己的经验谈之中,适合自己的方法就是最好的方法,希望对大家有所帮助。最后,辛达代报希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。


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