托福作文范文:独立写作能力


时间:2015/11/23
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咱们现已看到过很多关于新托福独立写作开始段和完毕段的写作技巧了,但是,关于基地段的却不多。实际上,托福独立写作基地段的写作技巧也恰当首要,假设基地段不充沛,不管开始完毕如何富丽,托福作文依旧得不到好分数。下面,小编带咱们来看一看“新托福独立写作基地段如何构思”,期望对咱们有所帮忙。

1.Q:一定需要三大段观念理由翻开来证明开始观念吗?

A:No. 基地段可以有一个观念翻开,也可以拿到满分. 同学们可以参看ETS的第三版 p202页的官方范文5分和4分范文赏析. 但是, 假设有两个至三个理由来证明开始观念非常好, 所以平常同学们要多练习Brainstorming快速找理由写提纲.

2.Q: 独立写作基地段的结构是啥?

A: 观念Main pointSentence+论据Details. 尽量不要突兀地写forexample, 需要指明比如之前的观念句. 其间观念句指的是证明开始段中观念的理由, 论据则是该理由的细节展现.

比如:观念Main point Sentence: Anotheradvantage of living with an American family is that the students are in anideal environment to improve his English.

论据Details: For example,each time he has a conversation with someone in the family, thisnative speaker can help him with the pronunciation and grammar. Maybe theyounger children in the family can help him with his homework, too. But themost important thing is that he will be surrounded by English most of timeduring his stay in the United States.

3.Q: 如何翻开一个基地期间才华做到评分标准5分请求呢?

A: 其实有很多方法将观念翻开Details, 比如: 我强化班会关键介绍的几种: Specific personal example 少而精的个人经历; General example 多而简的广泛比如罗列; compare& contrast对比反差; Study &Survey 查询数据; Famous people威望名人; Quotation名言谚语等.

4.Q: 独立写作基地段的论据假设想写个人经历, 应当如何写才算高分?

A: 留心个人经历内容写到精确详细, 言语做到精确地道形象. 比如:

观念: English does not seem to be spoken by Americansin the same way that it was presented in my textbooks.

个人经历: Take myself for example, the first time I asked anAmerican a question, I got a strange response. The man who answered my questionsaid something sounded like “dunno”. I was sure that I had never studiedthis expression in my textbooks, and I could not find anything like this indictionary. Eventually, I was surprised to learn later from a friend that this wasnothing more than a shorten version of “I do not know”.

5.Q:以上是不是每种方法都要在独立写作基地段用上?

A: 这几种方法都是平行联络, 可以挑选一种方法即可翻开一个观念句. 当然, 也可以挑选其间两三种方法使得一个期间翻开地非常翔实.

6.Q: 独立写作是不是基地段字数越多越好?

A: 翻开的Details的言语有些非常首要, 比如由电脑自动评分E-rater首要评判Grammar, Usage, Style, Mechanics, Lexical complexity等方面.

7.Q: 独立写作的基地段是不是一定需要 ”辨证式/反证式/让步式” 写法?

A: 有这种辩证式思路文章会写得更全面, 但是这不是必要的. 因为ETS的官方指南和评分标准通知咱们: 托福写作考的并不是该同学对一个观念剖析有多么深入, 首要是言语的表达和内容的明晰. 但是学会让步式写法在托福独立写作中也很有优点, 特别是当翻开观念理由不行时.

比如:[2010.09.12]

Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement?

Peopleshould not pay for the public transportation.

  

I

  

Agree.

  

S让步P1

  
  

[Concession] Admittedly, if people do not pay for public  transportation, the companies which run the transportation business would  suffer from large financial deficit. However, if the government can provide  them with relevant subsidy, there will be nothing to worry about.

  

SP2

  

Above all, If the public transportation is free for everyone, there  will be less people purchasing and driving cars, and thus, the air pollution  in the cities will be greatly alleviated.

  

SP3

  

Besides, free public transportation will lower the living expense  for urban commuters.

8.Q: 独立写作基地段假设写了三段, 句首有啥连接词可以使期间之间过渡地更流通?

A: 比如: Firstly/ To begin with/ Firstof all; Secondly/ Besides/ furthermore/ what’s more/ More importantly, Aboveall /; Thirdly/ Lastly/ Last but not least 等.

以上是新托福独立写作基地段的写作技巧,咱们可以根据这篇文章举出的比如做进一步的剖析,仿写,抢夺使自己的托福作文更加充沛,有条理。




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