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许多考生在托福写作中以为杂乱句能够提高文章的质量，展现自个“地道”的英文，取得更高的分数。这种主意有必定的道理，由于新托福写作的评分标准中的确有从语法或用词的多样性等角度调查言语质量的评分项目，但有时僵硬地寻求长句、杂乱句反而损坏语句的准确性。下面，咱们就来谈谈怎样帮你的托福写作“减减肥”，用简练的言语写出美丽的语句：

主张一： 防止空泛的单词和词组

1. 一些空泛的单词或词组底子不能为语句带来任何相关的或主要的信息，完全能够被删掉。比如下面的语句：

When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.

这句话傍边的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得剩余。完全能够去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空泛和繁琐的表达方式能够进行更换，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”即是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的比如，能够更换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.

主张二： 防止重复

1. 尽量防止重复运用相同的词汇。或许有的时分尽管词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时分能够做一些简化的作业。例如下面这个比如：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 对一个farm来说即是size方面的large，所以in size能够去掉，改为：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更简练的表达方式为：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有时一个词组能够用一个更简略的单词来更换，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

这儿的over and over again就能够改为repeatedly，显得更为简练：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

主张三：挑选最恰当的语法构造

挑选合适的语法构造能够使语句意思的表达更为精确和简练。尽管语法的多样性也很主要，但挑选最恰当的语法构造仍然是更为主要的思考要素。以下，引荐几种考生们在思考挑选何种语法构造时能够参阅的原则：

1. 一个语句的主语和谓语动词应当能够反映语句中的最主要的意思。例如：

The situation that resulted in my grandfather’s not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

从意思上来剖析，上面这句话需求表达的主要的概念是“grandfather’s not being able to study”，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation，谓语动词是was，不能着重需求表达的要点概念，能够改为下面这句话：

My grandfather couldn’t study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

2. 防止频频运用“there be”构造，例如下面的语句：

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

能够改为：My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

更简练的句式为：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如：

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

简介的表达方式为：

The dairy farm was located in a remote area，100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4. 仅在需求着重宾语而不是主语的时分，才运用被动语态。例如：

In the fall，not only did the cows have to be milked，but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather’s family.

本句不够简练的原因是本句的重心应当是“忙碌的家庭——my grandfather’s family”，而运用了被动语态后，似乎重心成为了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是自动语态，相对来说更简练一些：

In the fall，my grandfather’s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

5. 用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语，例如下面这句话：

My grandfather didn’t have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

Stand around doing nothing本来能够用一个动词来表达，即loiter：

My grandfather didn’t have time to loiter with his school friends.

6. 有时两句话的信息通过组合完全能够用一句话来简练地表达，例如：

Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

两句话的信息能够合并为下面这句更为简练的语句：

Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses，let alone pay for a university degree.

以上内容即是让你的托福写作更简练的三条主张，期望我们作个参阅，不要让过于杂乱的难句成为你文章的冗杂部分，那样不仅增加了由于语法疑问失分的可能性，也会对你的作文大打折扣，写作要量力而为，美丽的文章不仅仅是靠杂乱句堆砌而成的。