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自个刚触摸作文的时分，觉得最大的疑问即是标题的设置都是些不言自明的或许粗浅的不知道说什么的东西。比方建工厂好不好或许父母是不是最佳的教师，虽然有观点，但是即是觉得写不长，觉得无法打开。

　　详细点的比如，比方是从书本中取得常识好仍是从实习中取得常识好，有一段想说从书本中取得常识好，由于书一读就知道许多，多爽啊;实习的话要好久才干懂得一个道理，不efficient。观点是有了，怎么把它打开成150-200字左右的一段呢?

　　假如能够遵循以下过程就会便利打开：论说正面特征，打开论说，引证比如或数据，假如没有的不良后果。

　　榜首句：topic sentence:书本上取得的常识更全面，含量更大

　　第二句：正面论说subject特征：书是关于表象现实等的文字记载，虽然现实杂乱或许现实的取得用了好久，但是定论能够用很简略的文字取得。所以，比起经历，书本能够带给人更多的常识。(本句是对书的特点的正面论说，点名了书本常识的浓缩性)

　　从这儿，逻辑打开：从书本→浓缩了丰富的常识变成了书本→其性质是把各种经历做收拾和记载→浓缩了丰富的常识。也即是说，说理有些是在简略的逻辑(工厂→污染)中心加上一环(工厂→运营不免排放废水废料废气→污染)。这么看似简略，但是这么中心的一环却是有必要的，否则你说工厂会致使污染，判卷人会觉得：为什么工厂就会致使污染呢?逻辑跳动太大了，托福作为即是给一个6岁小孩讲道理，所以要像照料小孩子相同对待阅卷人，逻辑打开一定要一步一步的来。

　　本来，到这儿说理有些就完毕了，展示了你的思考疑问的逻辑构造。后边的“假如没有”，“引证比如，数据”之类的都是添加文采，扩充文字的，根据时刻长短，自个随意挑两到三样加上去即可。

　　1 引证比如：the example of__ matches my point of view perfectly; To look for better illustration, one can look no further than___; one case in point involves___, 自个编一个比如即可，能够是真的，也能够是编的，乃至是自个日子中的。引证比如的时分参阅一下上面的句型，别总用for example 和such as

　　2 引证“威望”查询和数据。A recent survey, revealing that___ can also serve to demonstrate this point; A research, in which__ were investigated, suggests that____. 查询和数据都是自个编的，别太离谱就行了。

　　3 假如没有： seldom can we imagine the situation without___; hundreds of years ago, when there was no__, people_(日子多么费事和艰难)__

　　下面是一个详细比如：

　　榜首句Knowledge obtained from books is more diverse and has larger quantity. (观点)

　　第二句正面论说目标特征Books are written form of documentation of facts and phenomenon, which, although obtained through numerous efforts, can be put down in only a few simple words. Therefore, compared to practicing,对比兼刺进 reading books can bring people numerous amounts of knowledge in a more convenient and efficient way.

　　后边的随意捡两样。假如没有Hardly can we imagine the situation without those concise expressions of ideas. Without the benefits of books, the brilliant ideas of predecessors will be lost due to the lack of recording; students will have no material to go over when they are faced with examinations; all the essence and beauty of poems and novels will never be appreciated by the descendents.(排比，是一个亮点，假如考场想不起来能够不写的)

　　引证比如More specifically, take the biological class as an example. If the teacher wants his students to grasp Mendel’s law of inheritance, instead of guiding the students to grow some pea, he will open up the textbook and tell the students what the result of the experiment that had been conducted is and what law Mendel has found.

　　引证数据Besides, investigation showing that books account for 90 percent of the sources provided for students to obtain knowledge can also support my side.

　　我们或许能够看出来，后边三个有些即便丢掉一有些阶段仍是根本完整的，实际上自个在考试的时分，刚开始没有把三种都用上，是写完作文还有时刻才再把单个阶段加个数据查询，或许再加一句假如没有的。

　　别的弥补一点：写完比如的时分最佳要再收尾一下，比方说，from the example, we can see that by reading books, we can obtain the most knowledge within a short time 之类的。这么论说就更完整了，逻辑在老外作文里是很主要的，骨头长正了肉才干长好，人才干美丽。