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In common sense, plants are vital to human beings. The various kinds of plants can provide us with food, shelter. clothing, or medicine. As to the most important kind of plant to the people in China, my country , maybe over 90 percent of Chinese people will point out crops. I think so too. The reasons are as follows.

First of all, as we all know, China is an agricultural country. In China, many provinces and large areas are covered by crops. A large number of people make a living depending on planting crops. These farmers work all days and nights in their fields to earn money to support their families. Every piece of crop will bring them wealth and hope. Crops are the all career of these people. Actually it is not only the hope for one family but is the hope of the whole country. No doubt, China is one of the largest countries which export crops in the world. Some parts of economy in China rely on the agriculture.

What‘s more. Not only is China an agricultural country as mentioned above , but China has the great population in the world. Till today, China has already had over 1.3 billion people. How can one country provide the essential materials to those huge number of people. If China does not cultivate crops but develop industry , starve will be the biggest problem. So crops are undoubtedly the most important plant to Chinese people.

To sum up, from the reasons I have pointed out. it is easy to get this conclusion that crops are really the plants which cannot be taken place in China. From these factors it is also obvious what meaning crops are to Chinese people. They stand for money even lives.

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In common sense, plants are vital to human beings. The various kinds of plants can provide us with food, shelter. clothing, or medicine. As to the most important kind of plant to the people in China, my country , maybe over 90 percent of Chinese people will point out crops. (not strong enough). The reasons are as follows.

First of all, as we all know, China is an agricultural country. In China, many provinces and large areas are covered by (it sounds that the crop is weed) produce crops. A large number of people make a living depending on by planting crops. Thesefarmers work all days and nights in their fields to earn money to support their families. Every piece of crop will bring them wealth and hope. Crops are the all career of these people.(you need connect the fore three simple sentence logically) Indeed actually it is not only the hope for one family but is the hope of the whole country. .(that is not true. China imports a lot every year) Some parts of economy in China rely on the agriculture.

What‘s more. furthoremore, Not only is China an agricultural country as mentioned above , but China has the great population in the world. Till today, China has already had over 1.3 billion people. How can one country provide the essential materials to those huge number of people. (?)If China does not cultivate crops but develop industry , starve will be the biggest problem.(why? need some explanation) So crops are undoubtedly the most important plant to Chinese people.

To sum up, from the reasons I have pointed out.(,) it is easy to get this conclusion that crops are really the plants which cannot be taken place replaced in China. From these factors it is also obvious what that the meaning of crops are is to Chinese people. They stand for money even lives.

structure is clear, but some meaning is ambugulous. donot just pile the simple sentences that are not really related together. practices make perfect

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