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TOPIC 134: Do u agree /disagree? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so.

With coming of some so-called new conception of education, “housework education” looms up in our society. Then children in increasing numbers are forced with dishcloths or besoms by their parents. It is true that some cleaning or washing tasks could improve the living-capabilities of children in some way; However, is it necessary to do those tough housework when kids are just 7 or 8 years old?

The first reason that came to my mind is for children, the knowledge from books or TV bring more fruits than housework. Books, the source of human’s intelligence, is an open-ended and all-inclusive mentor who lead children absorb knowledge like sponge. Meanwhile, television, one of the greatest inventions in 20th century, offer a direct and easy-understanding way for children to study. For example, when I was 7 years old, a TV program, “ten thousand questions”, like a key, inspired my desire of knowledge and erected my dreambecome a physicist.

The second reason that can not be ignored is compared spending time in doing household tasks, playing games is a more rational and effective choice for children. Games are simplified models of the real life in the society. Most rules governing a social life are highlighted in games. Games, an attractive, firendly, and patient teacher, unconsciously helps young citizens build up their characters-perservance, carefulness, courgae, confidence, and gives them a lot of useful advice when they are devouring the time.

Beyond these obvious reasons, there lies an in-depth reason that some household tasks such as washing dishes or cleaning the windows may have chances to injure immature kids.

According to the above-mentioned discussion, It is easy to draw the conclusion that for children, instead of holding housework, spending more time to absorb knowledge or play games is much more reasonable and rational.

修改意见：

意思很好，但表达重复不清，with the rapid development of society, a new concept so-called "housework education" looms up). (there is a increasing number of children who are forced...). It is true that some cleaning or washing tasks could improve the living-capabilities of children in some way; However, 观点句最好用肯定句，it is not necessary for children to...when they are just...)

The first reason that came to my mind is for children,(learning)from books or TV(is more fruitful for children )than housework. Books, the source of human’s intelligence, is an open-ended and all-inclusive mentor who lead children absorb knowledge like sponge. Meanwhile, television, one of the greatest inventions in 20th century, （offers） a direct and easy-understanding way for children to study. For example, when I was 7 years old, a TV program, “ten thousand questions”, like a key, inspired my desire(for)knowledge and erected my dream(to)become a physicist.

The second reason that can not be ignored is compared (with)spending time in doing household tasks, playing games is a more rational and effective choice for children. Games are simplified models of the real life in the society. Most rules governing a social life are highlighted in games. Games, an attractive, firendly, and patient teacher, unconsciously(help)young citizens build up their characters-perservance, carefulness, courgae, confidence, and(give)them a lot of useful advice when they are devouring the time. 偶钟意这段！

Beyond these obvious reasons, there lies an in-depth reason that some household tasks such as washing dishes or cleaning the windows may have chances to injure immature kids.

According to the above-mentioned discussion, It is easy to draw the conclusion that for children, .（spending more time to..., instead of holding..., is much more ...）

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