托福备考资料:T友写作范文汇总(五十一)


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81. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

With the development of technology, there have been a lot of changes to our life. Admittedly, some of them are bad., causing environment or social problems. However, most of these changes contribute to making our life more convenient, more comfortable and more wonderful.

First of all, Due to the development of internet, people could enjoy more convenient than ever. For example, people who with access to a computer and a LAN connection could unlock door and trawl through its offering. What is more, people could contribute and share knowledge through networked communicated system with others in any part of the world.

Secondly, technology makes people’s life more comfortable,. Because of the air-condition, people would never suffer the extremely hot and cold temperature. By using the plane, people could meet clients in the morning and have lunch with family at noon in Roma.

In addition, technology makes people’s life more wonderful. Helping with the spacecraft, people could arrive the moon, which is a dream rooted in the human being in thousand years.

Of course, technology has created some new problems, No one could forget more than 200,000 people died in Japan in the second world war, which is merely because of two nuclear bombs.

Despite the fact that technology has several disadvantages, In generally, its advantages are far more outweigh. In the light of this statement. We could conclude that technology has made the world a better place to live.

修改意见:

With the development of technology, there have been a lot of changes to our life. Admittedly, some of them are bad.have negative effects, causing environment or social problems. However, most of these changes contribute to making our life more convenient, more comfortable and more wonderful.

First of all, Due to the development of internet, people could can enjoy more convenient services more than ever. For example, people who with access to a computer and a LAN connection could can .(I cannot understand) What is more , furthermore, people could contribute and can share knowledge and communicate each other in any part of the world through this networked communicated system with others in any part of the world.

Secondly, technology makes people’s life more comfortable,. Because of the air-condition, people would never suffer from the extremely hot and cold temperature. By taking using the a plane, people could meet clients in the morning and have lunch with family at noon in Roma.

In addition, technology makes people’s life more wonderful. Helping with the spacecraft, people could arrive the moon, and which is a the dream rooted in the human being in thousand years came true.

Of course, technology has created some new problems(.), No one could forget more than 200,000 people died in Japan in the second world war, which is merelyattributing to because of two nuclear bombs explosion.

Despite the fact that technology has several disadvantages, In generally, its advantages are far more outweigh. In the light of this statement. We could conclude that technology has made the world a better place to live.

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