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Topic: Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

Whether persons would spend their entire lives in one place or not concerns their life style. Due to differently personal character and experiences, some people like to stay in one place thorough their lives, but others in contrast, prefer to move a number of times among different cities. In my view, I would be very happy if I have opportunities to live in different places. The arguments for this propensity are listed as follows.

One of the most crucial reasons for my view is that we could have more opportunities to realize our dreams in the process of moving between places. As a young man, we are all eager for success. However the road to success is so hard that we have to make great efforts. We must possess many aspects, including

outstanding intelligence, excellent education, rich experience and certainly good luck, most of which are acquired only by insistently pursuing, besides studiously striving in different cities. I can take one of my friends for instance. In order receive the best education, after graduating from the senior school, he left his hometown to a remote city, BEIJING. But four years later, to looking for a better job, he left BEIJING and come to SHENZHEN, a beautiful city in his dream. Now his new goal is to enter American B-School to acquire more advanced knowledge in financing. We can see, in just about ten years, he has moves three times, and what is more, this moving sill continue. Actually, in contemporary society more and more people are as this.

Another essential fact why I hold my view is that we can enjoy a more rich and colorful life, as we change places we live in. For my part, enjoying life is as important as, if not more important than, devoting work. It is a pleasing thing in the holiday to visit beautiful sceneries in different places. My friends mentioned in the last paragraph, has visited the snow scene in the north, and the widely sea in the south.

Admittedly, we cannot neglect the virtues spending the entire life in one place. People can attained the feeling of family to their community, and the relationships between people are closer. Nevertheless moving between cities perhaps is more attractive to young persons than staying in one place thorough their lives.

From all the reasons mentioned above, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that if it is possible, I would move a number of times throughout my lives to look for the best job, house or climate I am eager for.

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Whether persons would spend their entire lives in one place or not(is a matter of)their life style. Due to differently personal character and experiences, some people like to stay in one place(throughout)their lives, but others in contrast, prefer to move a number of times among different cities. In my view, I would be very happy if I have opportunities to live in different places. The arguments for this propensity are listed as follows.

One of the most crucial reasons for my view is that we(can)have more opportunities to realize our dreams in the process of moving between places. As (young men), we are all eager for success. However the(approach toward)success is so hard that we have to make great efforts. We must possess (去掉) outstanding intelligence, excellent education, rich experience and certainly good luck, most of which are acquired only by insistently pursuing,(and)studiously striving in different cities(if necessary). I can take one of my friends for instance. In order (to)receive the best education, after graduating from the senior school, he left his hometown to a remote city, BEIJING. But four years later, to looking for a better job, he left BEIJING and come to SHENZHEN, a beautiful city in his dream. Now his new goal is to enter American B-School to acquire (of)more advanced knowledge in financing. We can see, in just about ten years, he has moves three times, and (more importantly), this moving sill continue. Actually, in contemporary society more and more people (act like him ).

Another essential(reason why)I hold my view is that we can enjoy a(richer and more colorful)life, as we change places we live in. For my part, enjoying life is as important as, if not more important than, (hard working). It is a pleasing thing in the holiday to visit beautiful sceneries in different places. My friends mentioned (before), has visited the snow scene in the north, and the(wide)sea in the south.

Admittedly, we cannot neglect the virtues (of)spending the entire life in one place. People can(attain)the feeling of family to their community, and the relationships between people are closer. Nevertheless moving between cities perhaps is more attractive to young persons than staying in one place thorough their lives.

From all the reasons mentioned above, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that if it is possible, I would move a number of times throughout my lives to look for the best job, house or climate I am eager for.

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