托福写作病句修改示例(3)


时间:2017/9/13
作者:辛达托福代报名小编
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  31. I am not good at maths, but English

  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

  33.It is children who clear about their interests.

  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

  34. I agree the latter idea.

  改进: I agree with the latter idea.

  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

  38. No one knows all the things.

  改进: No one knows everything.

  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

  43. They will learn the bad habits.

  改进: They will develop bad habits.

  44. In this continued process, people make progress.

  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

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