托福写作不可取的10种开头方式


时间:2017/9/13
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 “害死人”托福写作开头之六:过分简单没有重点(喷血指数:☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-The importance ofenvironmental protection

  This issue is surely very important, let's talkabout it!

  “害死人”托福写作开头之七:用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数:☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very youngand so we can't take the responsibility to form a family。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之八:意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数:☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

  My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing.It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之九:中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

  I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons,many lucks”……

  正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children

  Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

  We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don't know isdon't know”……

  Topic 3- Do you think one's character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat's soncan make hole……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

  I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Goodhas good pay, bad has bad pay”。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之十: 观点武断 态度强硬 (喷血指数:☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic1-The importance of confidence

  In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successfulpeople in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don't have confidence,they all have failed。

  Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

  I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don't obey the traffic rules,we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I'm sure there will be no traffic problem anymore.

  以上就是小编对10种托福写作开头不可取的讲解,希望对同学们的托福 写作考试有所帮助。考生在托福 写作备考的时候一定要事先了解一下类似的问题,这样能够给大家的托福写作备考带来不小的帮助。大家一定要早准备!通过积累,一定会有所收获!

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