写作常见病句分析


时间:2017/9/12
作者:辛达托福代报名小编
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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

  2. For example, you work in a big factory.

  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

  6. Their brain is still very young.

  改进: They are still immature.

  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

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