托福写作中咱们该尽量让文章要言不烦，用词精准。依据国外专家的查询计算，一个以句号结束的英语语句，单词的数量最佳不要超越20个，不然的话，语句偏长，听话人的注意力有可能不会集，漏听一、两个单词，然后影响对全部语句的了解。那么咱们该怎样让文章更简练呢?

　　为了防止语句冗长，一般采纳两种办法，一种是将一个长语句，划分为几个短语句，每个短语句之间有语气上的中止，让听话人有间歇的感觉，别的一种则是简化语句的单词构成，用一些简略的单词，替代一些杂乱的单词。下面我就给各位介绍三种常用的简化办法。

　　榜首种办法是用一个单词替代一组意义一样的单词，比方：

　　①用forget(忘掉)替代do not remember(没有记住)

　　②用ignore(忽视)替代do not pay attention to(不注意)

　　③用now(现在)替代at this point in time(此时此刻)

　　④用because(由于)替代due to the fact that(鉴于下列现实)

　　第二种办法是省掉同义词或同义词。

　　比方在下面例句中，形容词important(主要的)和significant(有主要意义的)，即是两个同义词(也可以说是同义词)，咱们可以省掉important，只保存significant。

　　①The government project is important and significant.(这项政府方案是主要的，有主要意义。)

　　②The government project is significant.(这项政府方案有主要意义。)

　　第三种办法是在不改动语句意义的前提下，省掉一切可以省掉的单词。

　　比方在下面例句中，the cover of the book (书的封面)可以省掉成the book cover，is red in color(是赤色的)可以省掉成is red。

　　①The cover of the book is red in color.(书的封面是赤色的)

　　②The book cover is red.(书的封面是赤色的)

　　最终咱们把这三种办法结合起来，将一个冗长、绕嘴的语句，改写成一个简略、易懂的语句。

　　①University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校内路途有必要是便于通行的，不拥堵的，以便让学生、老师和职员可以无阻止地通过，到达学校的遍地。)

　　②University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校内路途不应当拥堵，以便我们顺畅通行。)

　　以上内容即是让你的托福写作更简练的一些主张，期望我们作个参考，不要让过于杂乱的难句成为你文章的冗杂部分，那样不只增加了由于语法疑问失分的可能性，也会对你的作文大打折扣，写作要量力而为，美丽的文章不只仅是靠杂乱句堆砌而成的。

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　　You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choicets should definitely spend more money on improving all forms of public transportation. These include buses, subways and trains. This is the best way to preserve natural resources and reduce pollution.

　　If I had enough money to buy either a house or a business, I’d buy a house. A business may succeed or fail. It’s also possible I might change my mind about what I wanted to do in business. However, a home is a lifetime gift to myself.

　　Right now I’m in small apartment, with barely enough room for everything. All my furniture and things I’ve accumulated since I left college barely fit. I have almost no closet space left. This means my clothes are always wrinkled because they’re crushed together. I don’t have any place to put my cleaning supplies, nor room for more than one set of sheets and towels. A new house would mean a lot more room for all these things.

　　I love having plants around. It’s very healthy for the air inside and it’s cheerful to have living things growing in a room. I’d like to have a garden instead. That way I could grow a lot of different kinds of plants and flowers, and I could have a vegetable garden in the summer.

　　Besides having a garden, I’d like to have a backyard with lots of trees and a small fountain in the corner. I love watching birds and listening to them sing. On the windowsill of my apartment, I put out bird seed every morning. In the hot weather, I put out a shallow tin plate with water in it for birds. The trees and the fountain in my backyard would gibe me pleasure, but they’d really be for the birds. The trees would give them a place to nest, and the fountain would be a source of fresh water when it’s hot.

　　Can you picture my dream house? A business would only give me money. A house would give me someplace special to be myself.

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