托福写作一定要避开这些陷阱

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　　1. 用词不当

　　学生们写的托福写作里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的疑问，可是要注意的是一些最最根本的过错是不能犯的。

　　In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

　　——problems应改为questions

　　2. 拼写过错

　　这儿的拼写过错不是指在考试时候的误打，而是托福考试考生对词汇拼写回忆的过错。

　　In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

　　——judgement应改为judgment

　　3. 乱用大词

　　First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

　　这儿的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该语句还有以下疑问：

　　1)该作文题目是讲学生是不是应该做兼职，因而children的出现就显得很不可思议;

　　2)although和but是不能连用的;

　　3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

　　4. 表达中式

　　The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

　　语句中划线有些的表达过于中式化。

　　5. 表意重复

　　They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

　　前面现已说到了兄弟，后面又说到兄弟。

　　The show is so compelling but attractive.

　　compelling和attractive是近义词，所以这儿这么写就让人不明白。

　　6. 固定用法过错

　　To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

　　——To some extends应改为To some extent

　　7. 例证夸大

　　For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

　　尽管好心的谎话是必要的，可是其成效明显没有这么大。