托福独立写作范文：人人都可以改变环境

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　　写作论题

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because environmental issues are too complicated, individuals can do nothing to solve them.

　　参阅范文

　　Our current environmental problems grow ever more serious. Sometimes they seem so serious and confusing that it seems an individual could never do anything to help fi x the problems. Personally speaking, I believe that individuals can make a difference. There are at least two areas where the efforts of ordinary individuals can be meaningful in solving environmental issues.

　　Firstly, individuals can protect environment by changing their ways of waste disposal. If every person would classify his or her garbage before throwing it away, much of it could be recycled and pollution could be reduced. Just take beverage cans as one example. Recent surveys suggest that over 7,000 tons of waste beverage cans go un-recycled each year in America alone. The cost of finding these cans after they have been thrown away, reclassifying them as recyclable and then sending them to be recycled is far higher than simply making new ones. However, if individuals would sort their cans before they discard them, and then discard them into the proper containers, the expense of recycling would decline greatly and there would be reduction in absolute pollution caused by the beverage cans. This is just one area where an individual can make a difference.

　　Secondly, environmental problems will be somewhat revolved once individuals in society consume less energy. It is because the requirement of natural resources used to produce energy will reduce and as a result, the environmental damage human inflicts will also decline. As an academic survey indicates, if every family in American could reduce their electricity use by 5% a year,1.65 billion units would be saved. It means that the generator motived by coals in the whole country can take a break for more than a month. In fact, not only can it make human’s requirement of natural resources less, but also it can alleviate the air pollution caused by burning coals. Consequently, for winning the battle of protecting environment, individuals’ endeavor, undoubtedly, is a great strength that should not be ignored.

　　Admittedly, most people do not have the specialized knowledge and skills to tackle many issues related to the environment. Besides, they do not have the influence to change entire systems. Nevertheless, the claim that individuals can do nothing to solve these issues is an obvious overstatement. In fact, the power that individual can exert is much more than we can expect.

　　In conclusion, I disagree with the idea that individuals can do nothing in solving environmental problems since the issues are too complicated.

　　参考范文

　　当时咱们面对的环境疑问现已越来越严重了。有时这些疑问看起来格外严重，令人不知所措，以至于大家觉得自个在处理环境疑问方面现已力不从心了。但是在我看来，即使是自个也可以尽自个的一份尽力，来改动这一现状。至少在下面两个方面，普通人也能为之做出有意义的奉献。

　　首要，大家可以经过改动废物丢掉的方法，来保护环境。假如每自个都能在丢掉废物之前将其分类，那么这些废物中的一大有些就可以被收回，进而削减污染。以饮料罐为例。最近一项查询显现，仅在美国，每年就有超越 7000 吨废饮料罐未能得到收回。假如大家要找回这些已丢掉的饮料罐，并将其从头分类、收回使用，其成本要比制作新罐子高得多。但是，假如大家可以事前分拣出这些废罐子，并将它们扔到相应的废物箱里，收回的费用则将大大下降，而由饮料罐导致的污染也会有所削减。以上这不过是自个可以为环保做出奉献的许多领域之一。

　　其次，假如每自个可以下降自个对动力的耗费，那么环境疑问也将在必定程度上得到处理。这是因为大家不再需求耗费很多的自然资源来制作动力。自然资源耗费的下降及工业生产的减缩，会下降人类对环境造成的损害。一份学术查询标明，假如一切的美国家庭每年能削减 5% 的用电量，那么便可节省 16.5 亿度电，而这意味着全国以燃煤为动力的发电机可以少作业一月有余。事实上，那不仅能削减大家对自然资源的耗费，一起也可以减轻因烧煤而导致的空气污染。因而，要赢得环保战役的成功，自个的尽力，毫无疑问，是一个不该被忽视的强壮力气。

　　固然，大多数人不具备处理许多环境疑问的专业知识和技术。此外，他们也没有满足的影响力以改动全部系统。但即使这么，声称自个在处理这些疑问上彻底力不从心明显夸大其词了。事实上，自个可以发挥出的力气是远远超越咱们预期的。

　　综上所述，我不认同“环境疑问过分杂乱，因而自个在处理这些疑问上力不从心”这个说法。

　　范文指点

　　这篇范文共五段。首段依然是引子、点题、观念、衬托四个要素。关于本题的论题，即自个是不是在应对杂乱的环境疑问面前力不从心，作者持的是一种否定情绪，并在其后的两个正论段中，从废物处理和动力节省方面进行了证明。别的，作者在论说以上两段时，也别离给出了详细的数据，作为细节加以佐证。在退让段中，作者使用了“退让句 +退让证明 +转机句 +转机证明”的四句话证明法。值得留意的是，这一次的退让证明中，作者给出了与退让句观念平行的另一观念，来对其做出弥补阐明。整体上说，整篇文章长度适中，且言语亮点较多，难度适中，十分合适考生仿照研习。

　　加分单词和词组

　　disposal [d??sp??z(?)l] n. ( 工作的 ) 处置； ( 废物的 ) 整理、处理

　　sort [s??(r)t] vt. 将……分类；挑选出某物

　　discard [d?s?kɑ?(r)d] vt. 扔掉；丢掉

　　generator [?d?en??re?t?(r) ] n. 发电机；生产者

　　tackle [?t?k(?)l] vt. 处理；与……交涉

　　make a difference：有影响；起作用

　　for winning the battle of：为了获取……斗争的成功

　　经典句型

　　I disagree with the idea that ...：我不同意……的观念

　　sth. is much more than we can expect：某事(物)大大超出了咱们的预期

　　in fact, not only can it make human’s requirement of natural resources less, but also it can alleviate the air pollution caused by burning coals: 事实上，那不仅能削减大家对自然资源的耗费，一起也可以减轻因燃煤而导致的空气污染

　　注：本句 not only 的分句中使用了倒装构造，对语句加以着重，神态动词 can 提到了方式主语it的前面。需求留意的是后一个分句，即 but also引导的分句不倒装，can 仍然在主语 it 以后。此外，本句还使用了后置定语构造 caused by burningcoals，对宾语 air pollution 进行润饰。