新托福写作加分点

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　　新托福写作加分点:

　　动名词做主语

　　To begin with, even in such areas as computer science, where it is estimated that much of what a student learns today will be obsolete in just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents will continue to be of benefit. Unlike undergraduate education, which is divided into a number of small educational units every term, post-baccalaureate education is concentrated on deeper learning in fewer areas. Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critical focus on complex issues or research projects. And even if the technical information relevant to completing a graduate-level project becomes outmoded, the learned critical methods and problem-solving approaches will not.

　　2. 运用不一样的辛达托福句型构造

　　Today’s education system places too much emphasis on students’ desires rather than their needs. Accordingly, students are searching for the easy way out, and educators are willingly conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I would argue that students should study what is presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not only should educators determine the curriculum, but also they should strive to insure that each individual student truly gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.

　　二、承上启下

　　1. 表明定论

　　in conclusion，in sum，to conclude，to sum up

　　2. 表明必定程度

　　certainly，clearly，obviously，plainly，apparently，surely，undoubtedly，naturally，for certain，for sure，of course，never，always，possibly，perhaps，likely，probably，potentially，presumably，to some extend，in a large sense，generally，speaking，in a sense，generally，in some sense，normally，ideally

　　3. 引出新观念

　　first，second，third，finally，in the first place，in the second place，last but not least，first of all，next，

　　another，In addition，additionally，further，furthermore，moreover，also，likewise，similarly，more importantly，imagine，suppose，most importantly，for one thing，for another

　　4. 引出具体解说

　　specifically，particularly，for example，for instance，in this case，in that case，as well as，in that，such as，in addition to

　　5. 表明对照或别的观念

　　otherwise，however，nevertheless，though，although，yet，meanwhile，while，But，instead，still，anyway，unlike，on the contrary，by contrast，by comparison，in any case，at any rate，in spite of，rather than，on the one hand，on the other hand，even if，apart from，instead of，even so

　　6. 表明依据呈现

　　since，because，actually，in fact，as a matter of fact，as a result，due to，owing to

　　7. 表明推理

　　as a result，accordingly，consequently，hence，thus，ultimately，thereby，therefore，as a consequence，if so，if not，according to

　　8. 表明重复说明

　　in other words，briefly，that is

　　三、巧用修辛达托福辞

　　1. 排比对称构造

　　Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate weather global warming exists, how extensive the problem is, what the likely effects will be and whether any remedy is possible.

　　Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate the existence of global warming, the extent of the problem, its likely effects and any possible remedy.

　　2. 比方

　　(1)明喻：比方词呈现：as, like, as if…

　　In many ways, no doubt, our world grows more and more complex, sputniks cannot be simple; yet how many of our complexities remain futile, how many of our artificialities false. Simplicity too can be subtle-as the straight lines of a Greek temple, like the Parthenon at Athens, are delicately curved in order to look straighter still.

　　(2)暗喻：比方词不呈现。

　　America has given the Negro people a bad check, which has come back marked insufficient funds.

　　3. 对照：加深印象

　　Extremism in defense of liberty is no vice; moderation is the pursuit of justice is no virtue.

　　4. 类辛达托福推

　　The Negro has a callus growing on his soul and it is getting harder and harder to hurt him here. That is a simple law of nature. Like a callus on the foot in a shoe that is too tight. The foot is nature’s and that shoe was put on by man. The tight shoe will pinch your foot and make you holler and scream. But sooner or later, if you do not take the shoe off, a callus will form on the foot and begin to wear out the shoe.

　　It is the same with the Negro in America. That shoe-the white man’s system—has pinched and rubbed and squeezed his soul until it has almost destroyed him. But it did not. And how a callus has formed on his soul, and unless that system is adjusted to fit him, too, that callus is going to wear our that system.

　　5. 拟人

　　Dawn was beginning to prowl about the sky and put out the starts.

　　6. 夸大

　　For she was beautiful—her beauty made the bright world dim, and everything beside seemed like the fleeting image of a shade.