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托福写作肯定不能犯的过错1、不一致(Disagreements)
所谓不一致不但指主谓不一致,它还包含了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。
例1. When one have money ,he can do what he want to.
人一旦有了钱,他就能想干啥就干啥。
分析:one是单数第三人称,因此本句的have应改为has; 同辛达托福理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为:Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错2、修饰语错位(Misplaced Modifiers)
英语与汉语不一样,同一个修饰语置于语句不一样的方位,语句的意义也许导致变化。关于这一点中国学生通常没有导致满足的注重,因此造成了不必要的误解。
例1、 I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
分析:better方位不妥,应置于句末。
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错3、语句不完好(Sentence Fragments)
在口语中,外交双方可凭借手势口气上下文等,不完好的语句完全能够被理解。但是书面语就不一样了,语句构造不完好会令意思表达不清,这种状况常常发作在主句写完今后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发作。
例1、There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
分析:本句后半有些“for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on 。”不是一个完好的语句,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。
改为:There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错4、悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面语句的逻辑联系紊乱不清。
例如:At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中“at the age of ten”只点出十岁时,但没有说明“ 谁”十岁时。按一般推理不也许是my grandfather,假如咱们把这个悬垂修饰语改清晰一点,全句就不那么费解了。
改为:When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例1、To do well in college, good grades are essential.
分析:句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚。
改为:To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错5、词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)
“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动辛达托福词用等。
例1、None can negative the importance of money.
分析:negative 系形容词,误作动词。
改为:None can deny the importance of money.
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错6、指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)
指代不清首要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物联系不清,或许先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
玛丽和我姐姐很要好,由于她要她做她的伴娘。
读完上面这一句话,读者无法清晰地判断两位姑娘中谁将成婚,谁将当伴娘。假如咱们把易于导致误解的代词的所指目标加以清晰,意思就一望而知了。这个语句可改为:
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1、And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
分析:句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。
改为:We can also know society by serving it ourselves.
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错7、不间断语句(Run-on Sentences)
啥叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析:这个语句包含了两层完好的意思:“There are many ways。” 以及“We get to know the outside world。”。简略地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或:There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错8、措词缺点(Troubles in Diction)
Diction 是指在特定的语句中怎么适当地选用词语的疑问,囿于教学时刻急迫,老师平常在这方面花的时刻通常极端有限,影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的琢磨,酌量的习惯。他们通常为所欲为,拿来就用。所以作文中用词不妥的过错比比皆是。
例1、The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
农业方面化学物质运用的不断添加也造成了污染。
分析:明显,考生把obstacles“妨碍”,“妨碍物”误作substance“物质”了。别的“the increasing use (不断添加的运用)” 应改为“abusive use (乱用)”。
改为:The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错9、负担(Redundancy)
言以简练为贵。写语句没有一个剩余的词;写期间没有一个无必要的语句。能用单词的不必词组;能用词组的不必从句或语句。如:In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,咱们依照上述“能用词组的不必从句”
能够改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
例1、For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
分析:全部语句能够大大简化。
改为:Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
托福写作肯定不能犯的过错10、不连贯(Incoherence)
不连贯是指一个语句前言不对后语,或是构造上不疏通。这也是考生常犯的缺点。
例1. The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
分析:The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为:Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
以上即是托福写作肯定不能犯的过错,共有10点,在咱们平常备辛达托福考期间需求咱们留意的事项有许多,咱们有时候通常会忌惮不到这些内容,期望考生仔细阅览以上这些内容,发现有不正确的当地,耐性改正。
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