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　　托福满分作文:看小说和看电影

　　题目

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and　short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to　explain your position.

　　范文

　　Reading fiction, such as novels and short stories, is more enjoyable than watching a movie. Of　course, the images in a movie are much more vivid, because you're seeing them on a large screen　in a dark room. The images you "see" in a novel are only as strong as your own imagination. But　the more you read, the stronger your imagination becomes. Reading exercises your imaginative　powers. Watching a movie dulls them. Imagination, like a muscle, needs to be used. Otherwise it　can disappear.

　　When you read, you're an active participant in your own enjoyment. That's one reason reading　develops the imagination. You're reading the words on the page and translating them into images　in your mind. When you're watching a movie, you're a passive viewer. The movie is giving you　everything. Nothing comes from you except your reaction to what you're seeing, and even that　can be given you by the movie. Some movie plots are so simple, you can predict what's going to　happen before it does.

　　Reading fiction also develops your storytelling skills. The more reading you do, the better you　become at creating plots and characters. The plots and characters in movies are often very simple,　because the emphasis is on action rather than on language or character development.

　　Still, going to the movies is a great community experience. Sitting in a large theater with a lot of　other people is fun. You experience the same reactions to what you're seeing together. Reading is　a one-person experience. It's a chance to go into an imaginary world by yourself. Both　experiences can be fun and rewarding, but I think reading fiction is more enjoyable.

　　一、言简朴素准则

　　所谓“言简朴素准则”，即是辛达托福行文不烦琐，语句应越短越好，假如一个字能说明白的，就不要用两个字。

　　例如：At this point in time，we should pull together for our goal. 如今咱们应当为咱们的方针团结一致。

　　这句话中“At this point in time”表明“如今”，咱们彻底能够用now来替代。

　　In the majority of cases，he likes to ride bike to the office. 他一般喜爱骑单车到办公室。

　　很简单的一句话，彻底能够写成 He usually likes to ride bike to the office。

　　平常咱们所说的用词多元化和地道并不是体如今这些时刻副词或者是彻底能够简化的烦琐句型上，而是指实用性极强的词如动词和形容词，比方：

　　Original：Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social experience and help you to understand other people's feelings and learn to be kind。

　　Revised： Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrich your social experience and help you to understand other people's feelings and learn to be considerate。

　　add，kind表达的意义都比较广泛。 add能够指数量上辛达托福的添加，也能够指程度的加强，关于“丰富经历、添加知识”这个意思，用enrich会使表达更精确。

　　kind从字面意义上讲是“好的、仁慈的”， 厦门托福 用kind来形容人无法详细地表现出一个人的性格特征到底如何，原句中是想表达“考虑周到、无微不至”的特色，要精确表达这个意义应挑选considerate。

　　别的，咱们多见的一些负担用词表如今句意的了解上。

　　比方：He has had many years of (actual) experience in business。他有多年经商的经历。

　　actual是剩余的，由于experience已经有actual的意味了。

　　We assembled(together) all the parts for our radio.咱们装好收音机的零件。

　　assemble自身就有together的意思，因而together是剩余的。“

　　二、对等共处准则

　　“对等共处准则”的意思是行文不呈现显着的带轻视或成见的字眼，包含男女性别，也要防止差异，以示“对等”。

　　例如：Many businessmen(businesswomen) feel their jobs are very stressful. 很多商人觉得工作压力很大。

　　这句话写 businessmen或是businesswomen都是不稳当的，能够改为 business people或 business executives或business managers就能够包含男女了。

　　当然，一些带有种族成见的字眼，甚至有侮辱的滋味(insulting words 或 slur)，也要尽量防止运用，避免闹出费事。例如：

　　对黑人不要用 Negro，更不能用Nigger(用 Black 还能够)，礼貌的说法 是Afro-American 或African-American;对白人不要用Honky(这是黑人骂白人的用字)，准确用法是 Caucasian，或 white people;对犹太人不要用 Hymies，应当叫Jewish 或 Jewishpeople;对越南人不要用 Gook，要用 Vietnamese;至于墨西哥人、西班牙人及中、南美洲人，包含 Puerto Rico，准确的用法多辛达托福是Hispanics 或 Latins，不过听说西班牙人为了保护自个的文明，倒喜爱别人称

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