具有层次感出彩托福作文如何写

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　　新托福写作怎么写出具有层次感和节奏感的出彩作文呢?英语语句的构造可以千变万化，下面小编为考生讲述：怎么运用技巧写出一篇极具亮点的好作文。

　　一变短句为长句

　　短句充满着新托福的写作考试，特别中国考生特辛达托福别喜爱和简略运用短句来应试，但新托福的写作要求句型要有必定的杂乱性。因此，在这种状况下，考生就不得不需要对某些短句进行拉长，借此来向阅卷者展示自个关于杂乱语言构造的掌控才能。

　　名词+形容词+同位语+定语从句

　　短句拉长的心法{

　　动词+状语(时刻，地址，意图，方法等)

　　接下来咱们就来详细看几个例子：

　　1. Governments have built new roads.

　　短句拉长过程：

　　1). 在句首加上时刻状语in the past two years;

　　2). 在名词governments前面加上responsible等形容词来润饰它;

　　3). 在名词roads后边加上定语从句which have brought much convenience to the local citizens.

　　改变后的语句为：

　　In the past two years, responsible governments have built a great number of new roads which have brought much convenience to the local citizens.

　　2. Factories have discharged gases and liquids.

　　短句拉长过程：

　　1). 在名词factories前面加上两个形辛达托福容词newly-built和chemical

　　2). 在名词gases and liquids后边加上一个定语从句which have had a seriously negative impact on the surrounding environment.

　　改变后的语句为：

　　The newly-built chemical factories have discharged harmful and even poisonous gase and liquids which have had a seriously negative impact on the surrounding environment.

　　二变非主语成分最初的语句

　　多运用非主语成分最初的语句不但能使写作句式多元化，并且也能有效地向阅卷者展示考生的写作技术。比方：

　　1. 动名词：Cheating on tests repeatedly invites self-defeat.

　　2. 过去分词：Forgotten on the desk was her favorite i-phone.

　　3. 名词性从句：What was needed in reality was not taught in school.

　　4. 代词：Such is the case when a new policy is made.

　　5. 介词：From the shortage arises the demand for nuclear power as a new source of energy.

　　6. 副词：Too often, students are forced to cheat on tests.

　　7. 形容词：Basic to any understanding of Japan after World War II is its impressive population’s growth.

　　理解了以上技巧后，关于同一句话，咱们就能改变出很辛达托福多不一样的写法。比方，对上面的第一个语句，咱们可以用以下的不一样方法来表达：

　　1) What invites self-defeat is cheating on tests repeatedly.

　　2) To cheat on tests repeatedly is to invite self-defeat.

　　3) Repeated cheating on tests invites self-defeat.

　　4) It is repeated cheating on tests that invites self-defeat.

　　5) Whoever cheats on tests is to invite self-defeat.

　　三变“一主二仆”式定语从句

　　一主二仆式定语从句是指一个先行词带有两个或两个以上定语从句的状况。该构造中的定语从句比较标准，均润饰一个先行词，概括下来有如下几种状况：

　　1. 作定语：可以把两个定语从句当作并排的定语，也可当作分隔的定语润饰先行词，或别离润饰重复的先行词。

　　… and the old ways of earning a living rivaled by new agricultural techniques, by commerce with hitherto unknown parts of the globe, and by new crafts with strange machines that saved labor and that ran without the traditional human or animal power

　　……陈旧的谋生之道正受到新的农业技术、新的交易、新的职业的应战;这种新交易是与国际上一贯无人知晓的区域进行的交易，而各种新职业则是运用一些无需传统的人力畜力驱动、可节约劳动力的独特的机器。(并排的定语)

　　Almost everything which really matters and which the world possessed at the commencement of the modern age was already known to man at the dawn of history.

　　近代史开始时，国际具有的每一项重大成就，已为前史发端期的我们所知晓。(分隔的定语)

　　And it helps to explain why so many inventions that were of Chinese origin or that had been known to the Greco-Romans, were fully developed and exploited only by the Western Europeans.

　　它有助于阐明，为啥发源于中国的很多创造和希腊罗马人所知道的很多创造，只是在西欧人手中才得到全面开展和充分利用。(分隔的定语润饰重复的先行词)

　　2. 并排句：可以把两个定语从句简略地当作一个并排句，也可以把它们拆成两个分隔的并排句，用来表明并排、转机或先后顺序等联系：

　　Consequently the manor was a self-sufficient village that was worked by serfs who were not free to leave, and who with their labor supported a hierarchy of lay and clerical lords.

　　因此，采邑是靠农奴运营的自给自足的村庄;农奴不能随便脱离，并以其劳动养活教俗封建集团。(一个并排句)

　　Not surprisingly, the most complex political structures appeared in the Sudan, where long distance trade was most highly developed and where Islamic influence was the strongest.

　　毫不古怪，苏丹呈现了最杂乱的政治安排，在那里，远程交易开展得最快，伊斯兰教的影响最为强烈。(两个并排句)

　　Our aim is to establish in Ghana a strong and progressive society …where poverty an illiteracy no longer exist and disease is brought under control;and where our educational facilities provide all the children of Ghana with the best possible opportunities for the development of their potentialities.

　　咱们的意图是在加纳树立一个强大、前进的社会……在这里，贫穷和文盲不再存在，疾病得到操控;在这里，咱们的教学组织为加纳一切的孩子供给开展他们潜力的最佳时机。(两个并排句，表明并排联系)

　　This hope was nurtured by the great victories won by Genghis Khan's grandson, Hulagu, who was a Buddhist, and whose wife was a Christian.

　　成吉思汗的孙子旭烈兀所取得的伟大胜利，助长了这一期望。旭烈兀是个佛教徒，而他的妻子是基督教徒。(两个并排句，表明转机联系)

　　四变句式的多样性

　　单一的句式，有时候尽管也能牵强表达出作者的思路，但读起来难免令人庸俗。为了增强文章的趣味性，主张考生还应该留意句式多样性的改变：

　　1. Berlin states that both positions harbor the same fallacy.

　　这句话平铺直叙，可是假设咱们运用插入语的话就会使其生动得多。比方：

　　Both positions, ironically enough, as Berlin points out, harbor the same fallacy.

　　2. Teenagers are pressured by schoolwork. They are encouraged by their peers. They have to resort to smoking like adults. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.

　　尽管这四个简略句都能环绕一个主题，可是给人的印象是作者的思路很乱。本来咱们可以用一个长句来把这个疑问说得很明白：

　　Teenagers, pressured by schoolwork and encouraged by their peers, often resort to smoking like adults, though they feel a little guilty.

　　3. Some people succeed. Other people fail. The difference is not the number of opportunities. It is whether they can take advantage of opportunities. Opportunities will arise in the course of one’s life, though they are rare.

　　上面这段话由5个简略句构成，构造上显得不行紧凑。咱们可以通过把简略句合并成杂乱句的方法(运用定语从句，同位语从句，插入语等)，把这5个语句有机地结合起来。如下所示：

　　One essential difference between those who succeed and those who fail is the extent to which they take advantage of opportunities, rather than the total number of opportunities, which will inevitably arise, if rarely, in the course of one’s life.

　　4. College students now are primarily interested in grades and economic success. They are expected to cheat more frequently. They are unlike those graduated ten years ago. They are only interested in their own personal future and consider little the problems of society.

　　上面这段话读起来令人庸俗，但若运用定语从句以及插入语对其改写，就会让人耐人寻味。如下所示：

　　College students, primarily interested in grades and economic success, are expected to cheat more frequently than those who graduated ten years ago, and are far less concerned with the with the problems of society than with their own personal future.

　　5. Energy is much needed now. And nuclear plants are clean and economical. They can produce vast amounts of energy. But people, especially local residents are very concerned about safety. They hold a strong negative attitude toward them.

　　上面这段话读起来有点零乱。咱们可以用插入语，因果联系和定语从句的形式，把简略句合并成杂乱句。如下所示：

　　Nuclear plants are a clean and economical way of producing vast amounts of much-needed energy, though people, especially local residents, who are very concerned about safety, hold a strong negative attitude toward them.

　　以上四点就是有关具有层次感出彩托福作文怎么写的相关介绍，期望在接下来的托福备考过程中我们可以熟练运用以上四点，最后祝福我们在即将到来的托福考试中取得优异成绩。