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句型剖析
英语的句型包含以下几种,简单句、复合句、并排句、并排复合句等。在新托福写作中,通常运用复合句辛达托福,辅以并排句和并排复合句,当然必定要有简单句,做到长短句相结合。下面摘录几个语句给咱们知道并剖析一下复合句和并排复合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.这句话是一个复合句,由even though引导的退让状语从句。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.这句话中是一个复合句。with介词构造中,有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解说阐明。
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.这句话是一个并排杂乱句。and 衔接了两个语句,是一个并排句;because引导的因素状语从句。
d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”,receive slow mark.这句话同样是并排杂乱句。由and衔接两个语句,变成并排句,再一个which引导的定语从句。
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有疑问的语句罗列
剖析以为,考生写的语句容易呈现三个疑问:一是运用破碎句,二是运用连续句,三是语句衔接不精确。
1). 破碎句辛达托福
所谓破碎句,即是语句不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语方式,如分词),或者是从句独自成句。
破碎句:She singing alone. (无谓语,singing是现在分词)
精确句:She is singing alone.
破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句独自成句)
精确句:He did not come because he was sick.
2).连续句
所谓连续句,即是两个语句直连续在一起,既未运用连词,也未运用精确的标点符号。
连续句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
精确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
精确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3).语句衔接不精确辛达托福
所谓语句衔接不精确,即是两个独立的语句之间以逗号衔接,这是不合英语语法的。精确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等衔接两个语句。
不精确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
精确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
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高分表达
除了在句式上长短句相结合精确表达外,主张新托福考生要运用一些特别的句式,以使句型多元化。句型多元化也是作文得到高分的条件之一。除了咱们之前常常说到的高分句式,如倒装句、着重句、状语前置、插入语等,笔者还提出别的一个句式的多样改变,即主语多元化。下面笔者将罗列几个语句归纳介绍前面四种句型,而要点剖析主语多元化。
正常句:Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒装句:Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装)
正常句:The internet provides people access to the latest information.
着重句:It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (着重the internet)
正常句:The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
状语前置句:Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句:However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入语:New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语)
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