托福写作12个失分点

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　　托福写作的12个失分点：

　　1. 托福写作阶段过长，不分段主语与动词共同疑问She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不共同。

　　2.文章构造不平行：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当运用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时分，应当运用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

　　3.不知所云：Many companies began using computers mouth.

　　4.语句别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。换言之，语句显得滑稽可笑。

　　5.在托福写作中不要运用缩写在正式的写作中。不要运用缩写方式(can’t，don’t，it’s，we’ll，they’ve等等)，而应当运用单词的完好方式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。

　　6.相关词语重复Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的首要主语和首要动词前运用连词。

　　7.语句不完好Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to gets into college. For example, my friend in high school.语句没有首要主语或首要动词，由于本来它应是一个从句。这是一个十分多见的过错，修正的办法是将两个语句连接起来。

　　8.书写难以辨认信息不准确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不准确，或许让人听起来觉得也许不准确(假如确实是准确的，应当解说为何这么，由于读者不认为是准确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;咱们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为稳妥起见，应当运用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.虽然看起来像个单词，本来不是，最少不是个英文单词。运用这个单词的另一种方式。

　　9.介词剩余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表明这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况多见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因此不能在它们前面增加介词。

　　10.跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很一般大多数人都现已知道到了，因此就没有必要再说出来。

　　11.标点疑问I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个十分遍及的疑问!很多学生在语句中运用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时分。

　　12.重复冗余Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一种意思的表述不止一次，或许某个词语不必要。

　　以上即是咱们为咱们介绍的托福写作的12个失分点，这些失分点要想改正是十分容易的，咱们只需要仔细即可，一起咱们还要确保自个的托福写作内容的准确性。