辛达托福代报考位:到2016年8月3日上午托福官网没有释放考位,在此提醒广大考生抓紧时间报名,注意自己的考试时间,如对托福报名有任何疑问,欢迎咨询在线客服。
1. 尽量避免重复运用相同的词汇。或许有的时分尽管词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时分能够做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个比如:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 对一个farm来说即是size方面的large,所以in size能够去掉,改为:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简练的表达方式为:
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有时一个词组能够用一个更简略的单词来替换,例如:
My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
这儿的over and over again就能够改为repeatedly,显得更为简练:
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.
3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如:
Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
简介的表达方式为:
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
4. 仅在需求着重宾语而不是主语的时分,才运用被动语态。例如:
In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather’s family.
本句不够简练的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather’s family”,而运用了被动语态后,似乎重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是自动语态,相对来说更简练一些:
In the fall, my grandfather’s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
5. 用更为精确的一个动词来替代动词短语,例如下面这句话:
My grandfather didn’t have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.
Stand around doing nothing其实能够用一个动词来表达,即loiter:
My grandfather didn’t have time to loiter with his school friends.
6. 有时两句话的信息通过组合完全能够用一句话来简练地表达,例如:
Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.
两句话的信息能够合并为下面这句更为简练的语句:
Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.
简略并不代表没有难度,一篇好的托福作文,有必要逻辑清晰、词汇和句式运用恰当。假如考生对长句没有太大的掌握,那么无妨拆成更有掌握的短句,一样能取得高分。
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