??辛达托福代报考位：到2016年5月25日上午托福官网没有释放考位，在此提醒广大考生抓紧时间报名，注意自己的考试时间，如对托福报名有任何疑问，欢迎咨询在线客服。

　　托福阅览题中6选3的标题难倒了不少学生，咱们首要就来具体解析一下这类标题的具体做法，然后依照要点，逐一击破。

　　榜首，直接读选项，扫除过错。何为过错?有三种也许：大写的小比如、没提过的分支细节内容、极点与对比项。此刻通常还剩余4个选项。

　　然后第二步：拉回原文，直接过每段首句以及最终一个尾句。收拾内容、在看方才剩余的选项，发现有三个是一一对应的，而且整句话里没有呈现过方才首尾句上没有提过的内容，即可判别出来。

　　写作有些(此有些高能预警!看完今后再写作文也许你会有“诶?这是我写的吗?”这种感受!)

　　*更重要的预警是——下面都是繁体字哦!让你进步英语的一起还能进步中文涵养哦!是不是棒棒哒!!!!

　　托福写作28分复习计划如下：

　　首要需求說明，作文一向都是教法最多樣化的一個门类，很難說哪個教學办法最佳。筆者所供给的是我的一些教學心得，和许多同學榜首次課說過，如下办法能夠短時間見效，但是有上限，超不過29。需求30的，老麥這個办法也许不管用。請指导。

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　　收拾個性化模板，添加寫作節奏感，和有用性

　　关于有机器修正作文的言语考试托福来说，让自个的写作有必定的模板，规划好好词好句，会在很大程度上节约写作时刻。添加固定好的词汇句式亮点，让自个有更多时刻处理作文中的非规划有些。

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　　審題明白，分論點不重合，有層次

　　仔细审题，根据标题中的要害字，找到适宜的视点，来提出2-3个分观点。

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　　证明充沛，字数确保，速度跟上

　　关于每一个托福高分来说，必要的扯淡才能很重要。要学会让自个的文章的中心段落充分起来，比如道理和观点的联系更紧密一些。

　　多选用四段论

　　Should students take part-time job while they are studying in the university?

　　It is not breaking news anymore that college has added working experience to the necessary requirements for students' graduation. The purpose to change this policy is not hard to infer. In the present-day society, as universities and employers find that increasing number of graduate students cannot adapt to their working conditions, lack the ability to cooperate with the team members, and some of them even lack of aright impression of their own major which they have studied for several years. Under this circumstance, I strongly recommend that students should take part-time job while they are studying in the university.

　　點評：學生的開頭段有必定的结构(下划线处)，同時觀點明白。

　　Firstly, it is a fact that taking part-time job can enable students to manage their book knowledge that they learned. When students are working in a real working condition, it is highly likely for them to use theories acquired in classes to the practice and reality. Take my personal experience as an example. In the first year of my college, I always regard my Psychology major as a role of psychologist, healing people's mental disease and their solving their personal confusion. However, when I work as an interpreter in the human resources department of a normal enterprise, I found that my book knowledge can be used in a variety of functional aspects. I can organized some games and small class for employees there to teach them how to cooperate with each other better and how to increase their working efficiency. As a result, I got an in-depth impression of my major. Therefore, it can be concluded that part-time jobs encourage students to put what they have learned into practice.

　　In the long term, hardly can we neglect the fact that students can be more competitive and confidentwhen they are hunting for a job if they take part-time job. Students with experience of internship can gain a deep insight into corporate culture, broaden their social circle, and may even get priority of getting anoccupation. For example, when my sister Jane was in her senior year of college, she decided to take a part-time job in the accounting department of City bank. During her process of working, she got along with her colleagues quite well, seldom made mistakes during the work of calculation, and always accomplishedthe work before other employees. Her excellent working ability, background knowledge and high efficiency so deeply impressed her boss that, at the end of her internship, he offered her a full-time position. As a result, she entered the City bank as an official employee when she graduate, and she is now become a manager in her department. Therefore, it is the experience gained inpart-time jobs that facilitates one's career.

　　中間段評析：

　　1兩個分論點有必定層次感，兼職首要能够促進學生十分好把握理論知識，同時能够促進一個人將來的就業。

　　2論證很有特點：分論點後面，2句話左右的道理，然後配上一個貼切的比如，然後加上总结。

　　3句首句尾都有必定的结构，有助於进步機器對於文章的語法評分。

　　To sum up, it is indispensable for students to take part-time jobs for the precious experience can not only motivate them to deal with their knowledge and theories learned in class better, but also render them more competitive and confident when they graduate.

　　結尾評析：這個結構比較完整，說明晰觀點，同時總結了相關的兩個理由。

　　那如今咱们再来展现一个学生的托福作文修正的典范。

　　在托福作文中，怎么有用的制定于一套归于自个的模板，而且灵活运用，是一个十分有用的备考计划。能够协助学生敏捷削减写作时刻，进步写作质量。在机器修正作文的状况之下。怎么确保作文的字数尽也许多，语法过错尽也许少，而且有用的好词好句更多，是获得25分或许以上的要害。

　　练习标题：Students should take part-time jobs while studying. Do you agree or disagree?

　　1　　学生作文的开头段：

　　In many countries teenagers can be seen holding jobs while attending school. I certainly go along with the idea for it is beneficial for teenagers to work while studying.

　　1　　模板套用后的开头段

　　Recently, as to whether teenagers should hold jobs while attending school, there arises a debate. On the one hand, it dawns on a few people that this benefits students. It occurs to others, however, that not doing it is more conducive. From my perspective, I am in strong favor of the former, since it could encourage students to gain social experience and understand the value of money.

　　2　　学生作文的榜首段

　　Some people think that students should only study, however, work is also learning in another aspect. For instance, if a student works in a restaurant, he or she would learn how to deal with customers, how to handle money, and how to work with people. These hands on practice provide teenagers a precious chance to learn about responsibility. These skills are of great significance in the future, but are also partly ignored in traditional education.

　　2　　模板套用后的榜首段

　　For one thing, it seems to be a fact widely acknowledged that jobs could enable students to gainsocial experience, which is of great significance in future career but ignored in traditional education. Various examples could illustrate my view, among which the case of Steven is the most convincing one. Steven, who is a distinguished businessman in Asia, benefits a lot from his part-time jobs. From 2008-2010, as a student majoring in finance management, Steven obtained apart-time job in a restaurant, serving as a waiter for VIP clients. This experience encouraged him to get along with a variety of customers who had different tastes and likings. What’s more, he learned how to cooperate with his colleagues and strengthened his communication skills. All these efforts laid a solid foundation for his future career. Actually, after graduating from the university, he began to found his own business, Pear Supermarket in Hong Kong,which dominated 90% of the retailing market.

　　3　　学生作文的第二段

　　Furthermore, students can learn about the value of money throw work. Take me for an example, I picked up a job as an newspaper delivery when I was in middle school. I had to get up at 5 o’clock every morning to post all the newspaper. It was tiring because it was just too early! What made it worse was the rainy weather. I could be wet from hair to toe, but never should the newspaper get wet. I better understand the value of money throw this experience because every sweat means every cent.

　　2　　模板套用后的第二段

　　In addition to the point mentioned above that doing a job offers students precious social experience, it could motivate students to understand the difficulty of earning money. This could be seen in my own story, whose experience demonstrates clearly the significance of having a job. When I was in middleschool, I picked up a job as a newspaper sender. Every morning, I had to get up at 5 so that I could finish delivering all the newspaper before 8 in order thatall the subscribers could read it before a day’s work. Had it not been for my working experience, I would hardly realize it is really exhausting and challenging to earn money. Hence, it is imperative for us to go outside and seek a job.

　　4　　参加退让辩驳段

　　It has to be admitted that there are people who hold contradictory views against the ideas stated above. From their perspective, doing a job while schooling leads to less time spent on learning academic subjects, thereby reducing the effectiveness of learning. This, however, could hardly hold water after second thoughts if we look into what is happening nowadays. Specifically, the government has implemented stringent rules and set up several organizations to make sure students are not required to work overtime by their employees, in order to alleviate/relieve the possible harm. What’s more, the public has already raised their awareness over this issue. All these efforts would render the view that doinga job lowers learning efficiency untenable.

　　(许多时分，当同学们写到中心第三段的时分，现已没有第三个分观点能够想到了，所以这个时分我们能够思考写一个对方分观点，然后进行必定程度的辩驳。)

　　5　　学生作文的结尾段

　　People always believe that students’ job is to study, but students will eventually set their foot in the society. It is never wrong to get more preparation before the battle.

　　5　　木板套用后的结尾段

　　To sum up, based on the discussion, if there is one truth I firmly believe in, it would be this: students are advised to take a job while attending classes, since it would bring us working experience as well as a rising awareness to cherish every penny you have.

　　托福写作的结构雏形十分重要，根本的雏形构成今后，接下来即是结构了，结构构成今后，中心再加上些“血肉”，一篇文笔不错的托福写作高分作文就构成了，所以在备考托福写作期间的考生们必定要仔细阅览以上这些内容，吃透里边的中心信息。

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