托福写作表达方式举例分析


时间:2016/4/2
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但是,因为前史、地舆和社会的因素因而,擅用名词化不只体现了写作水平,更是一种思想办法。从前一个针对我国几所顶尖大学的优异作文的查询显示,20 篇优异作文中名词化的运用频率为7%-8%,而一般习作的运用频率仅为5%-6%。与此同时,选用了20 篇英语国家学生的英语作文,相同的办法计算出其名词化的运用频率为10%-15%。有人更是戏说道,老外眼里语句分为3个层次,最差的是自动句,较好的是被迫句,倒装句等,最好的nominalization(名词化)的语句,这么的语句最学术最适合写论文。那么面临这么的区别,咱们需求重新审视咱们写作中的思想办法,做到如何适可而止又不“弄巧成拙”。

简单说,名词化即是动词或形容词被用作名词的景象。比方动词转成名词:discovery->discovery, move->movement, refuse->refusal,又比方形容词转成名词:careless->carelessness, difficult->difficulty, intense->intensity。那么啥情况下,咱们需求进行名词化呢?

A 谓语动词的宾语有些

原句:I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.

名词化:I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.

B 结合被迫方法

原句:If people decide without enough persuasive information,...

名词化:If a decision is made without enough persuasive information,...

C 替代比方从句中“the fact that”的用法

原句:The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.

名词化:My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.

非常好的名词化:a. When I denied his accusations, I impressed the jury.

b. In denying his accusations, I impressed the jury.

D 名词化有些用在there is/are的后边

原句:We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.

名词化:There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.

原句:The floods considerably eroded the land.

名词化:There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.

但是,有些时分,在咱们的思想办法中以为理所应当运用“名词化”时,老外以为是没有必要的。比方:

A 名词化有些跟在动词后边

原句(名词化“冗余”):The police conducted an investigation into the matter.

改后:The police investigated the matter.

B 名词化有些作为主语

原句:Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.

改后:We discussed a tax cut.

C 连续进行名词化

原句:a. First, she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.

b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.

改后:First, she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.

D 衔接有些名词化

原句:Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.

改后:They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.

原句:The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.

改后:Even though the motor housing was unstable, the research staff completed the field trials.




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